英文の添削をお願いします！

質問

1)If I (were) not ill, I (would) go fishing with my younger brother.

2)She loves him (as if) he (were) her own son.

3)If I (had known) it, I (can) have told you.

4)I (wish) you (had not) told the plan to your father.

5)You can listen to the music (as far as) you like.

6)(If) you like it (may) not, you have to decide what to do.

7)I studied hard in my high school days; (unless) I would have failed the examination.

8)No (sooner had) he gone to bed than he fell asleep.

9)I'll lend you the money (for) the condition that you return it within six months.

10)It's about time you (have seen) a Shakespearian play.

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よかったら解説も加えてくださると助かります。

よろしくお願いします。

回答No.1

cbm51910 · ベストアンサー

訂正した箇所だけ大文字にしておきました。

1)If I (were) not ill, I (would) go fishing with my younger brother.
2)She loves him (as if) he (were) her own son.
3)If I (had known) it, I (WOULD) have told you.
4)I (wish) you (had not) told the plan to your father.
5)You can listen to the music (as MUCH as) you like.
6)(If) you like it (OR) not, you have to decide what to do.
7)I studied hard in my high school days; (????) I would have failed the examination.
8)No (sooner had) he gone to bed than he fell asleep.
9)I'll lend you the money (UNDER) the condition that you return it within six months.
10)It's about time you (SAW) a Shakespearian play.

例題7)はおかしいような気がします。
7) I studied hard in my high school days; (THOUGH) I failed the examination.
が正しい文例でしょう。

ちなみに、"if I was" とか "if he/she was" を、"if I were" とか "if he/she were" という風に、"was" の代わりに "were" と表現することは慣例として残っているのでおかしくありません。