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【至急】ビジネス英文メールのご添削

取引先(派遣先)へ連絡したく英文で作成しましたが、ビジネス的に自信がありません(;_;)

ご添削の程、宜しくお願い申し上げます。

日本語
彼女達に支払われる下記の金額は彼女達用に作成した個別契約書に記載しております。
あなたに添付した契約書は御社用の契約書となっており、金額は御社に請求する金額を記載しております。

6月最終週に就業開始の田中の給料については(7月にまとめて支払うとのことですが)社内にて確認します。

英文
The following amounts paid to them are stated in the individual agreement prepared for them.
The contract attached to you is a contract for your company and the amount shows the marked up amount to claim to your company.

About Tanaka 's salary in June (it is said to be summarized in July) I will confirm it inside the company.

回答No.2

koncha108 · ベストアンサー

これで十分通じると思います。

The following amounts paid to them are stated in the individual agreement prepared for them.
しいていうと、in the contract for each of them. の方が自然と思います。

The contract attached to you is a contract for your company and the amount shows the marked up amount to claim to your company.

a contract for your company は、the contract for your companyとすべき。
The contract attached her is the contract between you and our company.
mark up は値上げすると言う意味になるので、the amounts listed here includes our handling fees and will be used in the invoice. としてみてはどうでしょう？

最後の、
About Tanaka 's salary in June (it is said to be summarized in July) I will confirm it inside the company.
これは、その前のやり取りがあれば通じると思いますが、この文単独で見たら意味が伝わりません。

Regarding the payment for Tanaka's June activity, which started at the last week of the month, I will confirm if it's OK in our company that you will pay at the end of July by adding to the July's salary.

田中の６月の業務（６月の最終週に開始した）の支払いについてですが、７月末に７月分のサラリーに追加して支払うことで弊社がOKか確認します。

お礼

ありがとうございます！！大変助かりました(;_;)

回答No.1

skydaddy

The following amounts paid to them are stated in the individual agreements prepared for them.
The attached contract to you is for your company and the amount shows the marked up amount to claim to your company.

About Mr Tanaka's salary in June (per your instruction, it will be paid with July) I'm confirming about the our company process whether possible or not.