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英文を添削していただきたいのですが… Richard Nixon was defeated by John F. Kennedy in 1960 presidential election, but in 1968 presidential election, he defeated Humphrey and was elected president. 1960年の選挙でジョン・F・ケネディに敗れたが、ヒューバートH.ハンフリーを破り、大統領に選出された。 ⇨1960 presidential election と 1968 presidential election 2回同じ言葉が続くのですが、不自然ではないでしょうか? 省略できるか不明だったので、一応文章に入れました。 >Richard Nixon was defeated by John F. Kennedy in 1960 presidential election, but in 1968, he defeated Humphrey and was elected president. =これでも問題ないでしょうか? あと、他におかしい英文があれば直して欲しいです。

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1。1960 presidential election と 1968 presidential election 2回同じ言葉が続くのですが、不自然ではないでしょうか?  不自然とまで行きませんが、繰り返さなくてもわかると思います。 2。>Richard Nixon was defeated by John F. Kennedy in 1960 presidential election, but in 1968, he defeated Humphrey and was elected president. =これでも問題ないでしょうか?  問題ないと思います。省略の点では、 3。あと、他におかしい英文があれば直して欲しいです。  ただし、ニクソン、ケネディー、と)並ぶので、he の代わりに Nixon か Kennedy(ただし姓だけで十分)かを入れる方がはっきりすると思います。

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やはり繰り返さなくてもいいのですね。 つまり Richard Nixon was defeated by John F. Kennedy in 1960 presidential election, but in 1968, Nixon defeated Humphrey and was elected president. 1960年の選挙でニクソンはジョン・F・ケネディに敗れたが、ヒューバートH.ハンフリーを破り、大統領に選出された。 …ということですね! ありがとうございます!参考になりました。

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