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質問

When I was a junior high school student, I told parents a lie. My teacher was returned tests me.But I hid that. I was asked for my parents, 'Did you back the tests?' 'No' I answered. Because I doesn't test well. I was so stupid as to tell a lie that might easily be found out.According to expectation, the game is up.
My mother heard a friend's mother what returned tests.
I had to listen to a long lecture.
I deeply regretted what told a lie.

宜しくお願いします!!

回答No.1

Him-hymn · ベストアンサー

When I was a junior high school student, I told my parents a lie. My teacher returned tests to me but I hid them. My parents asked me, 'Did you get your tests back?' 'No,' I answered because I didn't do well on my tests. I was so stupid as to tell a lie that might soon be found out. As was expected, the game was up. My mother asked my friend's mother if her child got his (her) tests back and the answer was yes. She gave me a long lecture. I deeply regretted that I had told a lie to my mother.

以上でいかがでしょうか？

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回答ありがとうございました!!

回答No.2

oignies

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