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今度学校で、夏休みの思い出について発表するのですが、英文があっているのかすごく不安なので、アドバイスをぜひお願いします(*>ω<*) I went to Open-campus with my mother. The amazing thing was that I met a professional soccer player, Naoshi Nakamura there. He was present as a guest, and I had a chance to shake hands with him. I am interested in sports and I want to be a sports trainer in my future, so it was wonderful experience for me. 私は母とオープンキャンパスに行きました。驚いたのはプロサッカー選手の中村直志さんとそこで会ったことです。直志さんはゲストとして参加されていて、私は直志さんと握手する機会がありました。私はスポーツに興味があり、将来はスポーツトレーナーになりたいと思っているので、とても良い体験ができました。
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第二文は It was amazing that... か I was amazed to meet...と受身にするのがよいと思います。 最後の文章は It was wonderful experience for me,because... とするとすっきりするのでは？
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