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神が無条件で愛を与えて下さるように、私もまた貴方を無条件で愛しています。 私が虚しく生きた今日は、昨日死んでいった人があれほど生きたいと願った明日。 私も明日も生きていたい。 一日は短い単位の一生、一生は長い単位の一日。 一日を一生の如く真剣に生き、一生を一日の如く気楽に,そして健康に生きたい。 生まれ変わったら貴方の娘にして下さい。 I love you unconditionally as of God gives love unconditionally to everyone. Today I lived in idly is the tomorrow the person died yesterday desperately wanted to live for another day. I want to live tomorrow, too. A day is short version of a life and a life is a long length of a day. I would like to live faithfully, carefully and in a great health. Please make myself one of your daughters when I reborn.

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名文ですね。感動しました。人生って毎日生きてる事に 感謝することでもっと充実するんでしょうね。  1行目は良いとおもいます。2行目以降ですが、 'Today' which I have passed idly and aimlessly is the another day the deceased strongly desired to spend as 'tomorrow'. A day is a short part of life and life is accumulation of days. I want to spend a day seriously as if it's a whole life and at the same time I want to spend a whole life easily and peacifully as if it's a day. I wish I could be your daughter if I was reborn. うーん、難しい。 どの様な背景か存じませんが、日本語のニュアンスを英文にするにはそうとう人生経験が必要と感じます。

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