How to Increase the Number of Volunteers for a Recruiting Poster
- The recruiting poster for volunteers is not attracting enough participants. This article explores strategies to increase the number of volunteers and the reasons behind the lack of response.
- One reason for the low response rate is a lack of information about the benefits of volunteering. This discourages high school students who may be interested in volunteering. Another reason is the fixed schedule for volunteer work, which conflicts with their busy academic lives.
- To address these issues, it is recommended to revise the content of the poster. Highlight the various benefits of volunteering and emphasize that students have the freedom to choose when and how they volunteer. These changes can potentially attract more volunteers.
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出来栄えも10てん中で判断してほしいです。 ポスターで募集をかけているボランティアの数を増えないのでどうすれば増やせるか(慶應経済) そしてそれは何故増えないのか 増やすにはどうすればいいか 何故成功できると考えるか を 含めて説明せよ という問題です I think why only a few students responded is a variety of reasens. One reasen is that a lot of good imformation ,such as merits of volunteer are lacking. By this demerit, a lot of high school students to want to work as a volunteer may lose motivation. Another reasen is that the time to carry out a volunteer work is fixed. They can't conduct volunteer everyday because they are busy studying as a high school students . Therefore, I think what they can do to increase the number of volunteers is that they should change a cotents of the poster. if they can describe a vriety of merits of volunteer work and explain the students can be free to have a right to conduct volunteer work in poster , they will be able to increase the number of volunteers.
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I think why only a few students responded has a variety of aspects. → why = the reason(s) why なので、the reasons ... are a variety of reasons.となってしまうのは、上手な文ではないですね。 私なら I think there are a few reasons why not many people have responded to the poster. こうすればreasonsが生きます。 One is that a lot of good imformation ,such as merits of volunteer are lacking. imformation → information → One reason is that the poster does not tell (show) you a positive aspect of volunteering. By this demerit, a lot of high school students to want to work as a volunteer may lose motivation. →Because of this, a lot of high school students may not have interests in these volunteer activities. Another reasen is that the time to carry out a volunteer work is fixed. reasen → reason →Another reason is that the days you set for the volunteer activities are very limited. They can't conduct volunteer everyday because they are busy studying as a high school students. everydayは言い過ぎでは？ →They can't get responsibly involved in the volunteer activities if you offer them too much. They are too busy to spend many days for volunteer activities. Therefore, I think what they can do to increase the number of volunteers is that they should change a cotents of the poster. a cotents ??? contentとつづる。しかも、単数・複数両方はまずい。 the contents of the poster → you should rewrite the words on the poster. →Therefore, simply by changing the words on the poster, you can expect to have more people to join you. if they can describe a vriety of merits of volunteer work and explain the students can be free to have a right to conduct volunteer work in poster , they will be able to increase the number of volunteers. if → If, vriety → variety →If you can describe a variety of merits of volunteer work, you may be able to increase the number of volunteers. 添削の域を出たかもしれませんが、それぞれの文を改良したり、書き換えたりしましたので、参考にしてください。
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