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Difference in elementary school life between Japan and America
The first is going to school.
In Japan, people basically
walk to school.On the other hand, in the United States, parents usually go to school by school bus or send their parents to meet them.
This has reasons such as, "It's dangerous when a bad person comes."
Second, there is a swimming class.
In Japan, swimming is a compulsory subject in physical education classes.In the first place, there are only about one or two physical education classes a week.
·The third is the textbook.
In Japan, the Ministry of Education presents children free of charge.In America, however, textbooks are rented from schools.
Therefore, children cannot bring back textbooks from school.
There is a big difference between elementary school life in Japan and the U.S.
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