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私は英語が苦手で英作文を作ったのですが、自信がないのでどなたか添削してください! よろしくお願いいたします。 History of soba that originated in Japan More than 9,000 years ago, buckwheat flour was found in the ruins of Kochi Prefecture. Soba was a familiar plant and food. Soba was used as a food before the Nara Period. At that time, they were eating rice gruel with grains. In the Edo period, soba was eaten as noodles. That cooking method was different from what it was today. Soba became popular around the middle of the 18th century. This is because it has changed to boiling cooking and you can enjoy the original deliciousness. And gradually, soba became a highly regional food, and the local soba was born. There is a place like [Shin-soba] near here. Soba has changed a lot in a long history.That's why they are so popular today.

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1。「9000年以上前に高知県の遺跡から蕎麦の実の花粉が発見された」  というのが原文ですが、この原文を見て発見した時が九千年以上前と思う人はいないでしょう。ところが英訳はそうも読めます。  また花粉が  flour になっていますが、これは(蕎麦などの)粉のことで、下記のように pollen にしないと誤解を招きます。  https://eow.alc.co.jp/search?q=pollen  英訳では「高知県の廃墟」となり「コーチケンという荒れ果てたお城」のようです。ここでは archaeological site と一語付け加えたほうがいいように思います。  In Kochi Prefecture (on the island of Shikoku) at a site dated more than 9,000 years ago archaeologists found some buckwheat pollen とも。 2。第二文  Soba was a familiar plant and food.> Buckwheat became a part of daily food.とも 3。第三文 a は要りません。 4。第四文  At that time, they were eating buckwheat grains as we eat rice gruel today without grinding them into flour. とも。 5。第六文  原文は「その調理方法は現在と違い蒸していた」ですが。  That cooking method was different from what it was today.ですと最後の一番大切なところが抜けています。 Unlike today's cooking method of boiling the noodles were steamed in the Edo period. とも。 6。第十文  ご当地そばには「にしんそば」などがある、が原文ですが  There is a place like [Shin-soba] near here. では誤訳です。  「にしん」は鰊で、下記のようにかけそばに身欠き鰊の甘露煮を乗せたものです。鰊は北海道が原産ですが「鰊蕎麦」は京都でできたという説もあります。  http://soba-ya.com/syokuzai/1380.html  ニシンそばは、下記などをごらんください。  https://www.google.co.jp/search?q=%E3%83%8B%E3%82%B7%E3%83%B3%E3%81%9D%E3%81%B0&tbm=isch&source=hp&sa=X&ved=2ahUKEwjs5vX1s7DkAhUOW60KHXMNBtAQsAR6BAgEEAE&biw=1920&bih=852  One of the regional specialty soba is "Nishin-soba" with a herring in it. とも。  https://eow.alc.co.jp/search?q=%e9%b0%8a 7。他に色々訳し方があるでしょうから、これはほんの一例です。

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