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「逆にmedicareやeducationの費用削減にはあまり賛成できなかった。Obamacareには、合衆国内のすべての居住者が健康保険を受ける権利があります。 これは多大な費用がかかっているが、健康保険に加入するという制度はアメリカ国民にとってhelpfulだと思う。」 In contrast, I could not agree with the cost reduction of medicare and education. Obamacare, all people who live in the United States are entitled to health insurance. Although it costs a lot of money, I think that this system is helpful for American citizens to take out health insurance. こちらの英文を添削して欲しいです。 よろしくお願いします。

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以下のとおり、恒例の手順でお答えします。 >「逆にmedicareやeducationの費用削減にはあまり賛成できなかった。Obamacareには、合衆国内のすべての居住者が健康保険を受ける権利があります。 これは多大な費用がかかっているが、健康保険に加入するという制度はアメリカ国民にとってhelpfulだと思う。」 >In contrast, I could not agree with the cost reduction of medicare and education. Obamacare, all people who live in the United States are entitled to health insurance. Although it costs a lot of money, I think that this system is helpful for American citizens to take out health insurance. *~にはあまり賛成できなかった:could not much agree with ~。 *Obamacareという制度では:In the system called Obamacare。 *合衆国内のすべての居住者:all people who live / all residents in the United States。 *これには多大な費用がかかっているが、~と思う:Although it costs a lot of money, I think ~ / It costs a lot of money, but I think ~。(通常、butはなるべく避けた方がいいかも知れませんが、このようにbut I thinkと続くときは比較的よく用いられます。) *誰でも健康保険に加入できるという制度:the system that anyone can join health insurance。*アメリカ国民にとって大いにhelpfulだ:is greatly helpful for the American people / citizens。 ⇒On the contrary, I could not much agree with the cost reduction of medicare and education. In the system called Obamacare, all people who live / all residents in the United States are entitled to health insurance. It costs a lot of money, but I think that the system that anyone can join health insurance is greatly helpful for the American people / citizens. =「逆に、medicareやeducationの費用削減にはあまり賛成できなかった。Obamacareという制度では、合衆国内のすべての居住者が健康保険を受ける権利が与えられます。 これには多大な費用がかかっているが、誰でも健康保険に加入できるという制度は、アメリカ国民にとって大いにhelpfulだと思う。」

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回答ありがとうございます。 すみません、以前に「反対に」に関する回答を頂いていたのですが、それよりも以前に英文を作成していたため訂正できていませんでした。 なんども同じ訂正をさせてしまい、申し訳ないです。 >butはなるべく避けた方がいいかも知れませんが… とありましたが、おっしゃる通り、butを使わないように色々工夫していました。ですが、時と場合によるんですね。Butから始まる文章はやはりよくないですが、It costs a lot of money, but I think ~のように続く場合はbutも使っていいんですね。 その辺が少し混乱します…笑 その他、添削ありがとうございます。大変参考になりました!

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