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I was born and raised in Miyazaki, and then I went to university in Tokyo. After graduating from the law department, I returned to Miyazaki right now because of my health. 表現や文法に不適切がないかどうかご指導ください。

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普通の会話であればOKと思います。 後は慣用句などと思いますが、 law department, を文章に入れたのはこのところを若干、強調したかったのでしょうか? 参考程度でもなればいいのですが。 I was born and brought up in Miyazaki prefecture. And then I went on to university in Tokyo. Because of my health, after graduating from a law department of the university, I returned to Miyazaki.

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