妥当な英作文への修正お願いします。

質問

Ｉneed to improve my communication skills.
because,I am not good at express skills.
after evening, I bought a book that title was social psychology of bad communication.
I haven't discoverd that another person said a part of my foolish behavior.
So, I decide that I don't bother all of my field of my family,co-worker,friends.
I wish happiness all of my relative people,and achivement my goal in life.

文法の間違いがあり、うまくまとめきれてないんですが、よろしくお願いします。

回答No.1

JerseyBoy

I have to improove my communication skill, because I am not good at expressing.

I bought a book titled as Social Psychology of Bad Comminication, tonight.
I didn't notice my foolish behavior which was pointed out by somebady.
So I decided that I will not bother anybody around me such as ...
I wish all of your happiness and achievment of my goal in my life.

一応、文法的に正しく直しました。参考にしてください。

もし英語を勉強するのであれば、５構文を理解してください。

現状は単語を並べているだけで文章になってません。

お礼

ありがとうございます。

只今、英語の勉強を始めて1ヶ月です。

もう一度5構文から復習します。

大変参考になります。