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大学受験浪人生です よろしければ添削お願いいたします あなたは日本のどこかの大都市がオリンピックを招待すべきだと思いますか、思いませんか。 またそれはなぜですか。 あなたの考えを80語以上の英語でまとめよ I agree that somewhere city should invite Olympics. This is because I think that Olympics improve economics in many ways. For example, some people will want to watch Olympics directly so people will visit the city where Olympics are held and they will live in the city for a while. While they are living in the city, they will buy a lot of goods at the city and consequently, it will make economics improve. That is why I agree that somewhere city should invite Olympics.


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  • ethta
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他にもあるかもしれませんが、私が気づいたのは・・・ - Olympics --> the Olympic Game - somewhere city --> one of the big cities in Japan - Olympics improve --> Olympics would improve - economics --> Japanese economy - live in the city --> stay in the city (住む人も中にはいるかもしれないけど) - and consequently, -->. Consequently, / ,thus creating a positive economic impact.



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