Yesterday, I had an English lesson and received feedback from someone. They also bought presents for my family. I'm grateful for their support.
I got home at 5:00 PM. It was a smooth journey.
During the lesson, I had the opportunity to see pictures and learn more about the person's life. They seemed bright and smart. They also mentioned that they are healthy and have no problems.
英語教えてください
どなたか添削をお願いいたします。
Thank you for talking me to the oo and buy the present for my family yesterday.
今日はooを案内してくれて、家族にお土産まで買ってくれて昨日はありがとう。
I arrive at home 17:00.
家には17時には家に着いたよ。
I am glad that know your office and your place.
あなたの職場も住まいもみれてよかった。
Also I am glad that I could see your pictures, I little bit understand how was your life.
あなたの昔の写真をみて、あなたの過去の人生を少しわかった気がして嬉しかった。。
I think you are very blight, smart.
あなたはとても明るくて賢いく育った人だと思った。
You must be tired today so please take a good rest.
今日はとても疲れたはずだから、ゆっくり休んでください。
When you can't sleep, please call and email me anytime.
もし眠れない時は、いつでも電話でもメールでもしてください。
I am really healthy and nothing any problem on my body and health.
それと、私はとても健康で、何の問題もないです。
I couldn't control any my life because God's plan our life,,,
神様の計画だから、私が全てはコントロールできなかった、様々な事を。
こんにちは。
そのままでも充分に通じるように思いましたが、
せっかくですので、少しだけ手を入れましたので、
参考にされて下さい。
Thank you for taking me to the oo and buying
the present for my family yesterday.
I arrived home at 17:00.
It was nice to see your office and your home.
I am also glad that I could see your pictures,
as I now feel that I understand a bit more about
your life.
I think you are a very bright, smart person.
You must be very tired today, so please take a
good rest. If you can't sleep, please call or
email me anytime.
By the way, I am really healthy and have no
health problems. It's just that I couldn't control
everything in my life, as God has His own plans
for us.
お礼
こんにちは。 早速添削してくださり感謝します! とても勉強になりました。参考にさせていただきます。 どうもありがとうございました!