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- 私はXの友人でWと言います。あなたのメールアドレスは、彼がZ国を発つ時に教えてもらいました。数日前に、Xの夢を見ました。それで、彼に何か進展があったのだろうと思ってメールしました。
- Hi,M I am W and one of X's friend.I got your e-mail adress from him when he left Z. I had a dream about him a couple days ago. Then I thought something might have happend to his situation.
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さっそく弟さんへメールしました。こんなに早くすごく良い感じに直してくださったうえに、励ましのお言葉までいただいて、本当に感謝しています。どうもありがとうございました。
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