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ネイティブの人に英語が不自然と言われましたが、どこがいけないかは教えてもらえません。直してみました。文法面と自然さからのコメントをいただければ幸いです 原意：新生児期のリンパ浮腫としてはターナー症候群に見られるものがよく知られているが、それらは数週間で自然に消退する。 A well known lymphedema in the neonatal period is seen in infants with Turner syndrome, but lymphedema in these infants disappears naturally in several weeks. 2つ作ってみましたが、But は不適切かなとも思います。 １）Lymphedema in neonatal period is often seen in the babies with Turner Syndrome, but the lymphedema in this syndrome naturally disappears in several weeks. ２）As for lymphedema in neonatal period, the one observed in Turner syndrome is well known. But lymphedema seen in this syndrome usually disappears in a natural course. 原意；（子どもだけはなく）母にもリンパ浮腫があったが、(珍しいことに）それは左足に限局していた。 The mother also had lymphedema, but swelling was limited to her left foot. これも日本語の「が」に引きずられて 「but」としないほうが良いでしょうか。 The mother also had lymphedema, and it was limited to her left foot． 長い距離を歩くと必ず左足が痛くなる、特に熱い季節にはそうであると彼女は述べた。 She reported that she felt an ache in her left foot each time after going for long walk, especially in the hot weather. each time after は何か変に感じるので直してみました →She mentioned that she always had a pain in her left foot after a long walk, especially in a hot season. ネイティブか英語に慣れた方のコメントをもらえれば嬉しいです。
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