自由英作文の添削をお願いします。
問題文:
次のような想定で手紙の一部を書け。
「あなたが中学生のときから文通を続けてきたJamesが初めて日本を訪れることになった。滞在期間は1月から2月までではどうかと言ってきた。それに対して、(1)来日の時期は3月末からの1ヶ月間にした方がよいとすすめ、(2)なぜその方がよいかを具体的に説明し、返事を出す事にした。
印刷してある書き出しの部分に続けて、上記の(1)と(2)の内容を入れて、40語程度で書け。」
Dear James,
I was delighted to get your letter and learn that you will be able to visit Japan in the near future. I am looking forward to meeting you. I will be happy to show you some of the famous places in Japan.
You said in your letter that you would like to come for one month from January to February._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Please let me know if that would be all right with you. I'll be looking forward to hearing from you.
My regards to your parents.
Sincerely, yours,
自分の解答:
I recommend that, however, you come for one month from in the end of March.
That is why it will be still cold for getting around, and in spring, you can see a lot of beautiful Sakura which is popular for visitors in Japan.
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