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まず [When] traveling abroad ,which should be enjoyable ,you are often faced with troubles. 楽しいはずの海外旅行にもトラブルはつきものだ。の日本語そのまま英語にしてるようですが、よく考えるとそのままで英語にすると意味がおかしいことに気が付きます 意味としては、「海外旅行は楽しいもの"であるが"」ということ つまり、海外旅行は楽しいものというのはいいとして、楽しいはずということとトラブルとは全く関係ないことです これは、日本語の問題です あと、shouldを使うと、誰にとっても、いかなる場合でも、というように聞こえます せめて、which is enjoyable for manyとするとか Traveling abroad is enjoyable for many, but sometimes, troubles may occur on your trip. For example ,you have to stay there longer [when] airplanes do not fly due to bad weather and natural disasters. ここは、because と due toの重なりというのもあるし、"例"にbecauseはなんかおかしいです この場合の例では「～の場合には」ということを語るわけですから In any case, [the] most important thing [もしくはwhat is most important: thingは余計] is that you [need to] judge the situation [without losing composure],and try to solve the troubles ,using the knowledge and information you have (about the area: これいらないと思う) and your ability to speak [the language of the country]. 個人の好みもありますが、what is most important (thing) isという表現って冗長ですよね あと、the country languageは間違いではないのかもしれないけれど、なんか"方言"のように聞こえるのは私だけでしょうかね もう一つ、in "any" caseは、前段でもっと多くのことが語られているときに使える表現と思います つまり、例がもっと必要 文法的には間違いではなく、言いたいこともわかるのでそのままにしました
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