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Although the reading section claimed that it is possible to evaluate people’s intelligence by simply taking IQ test, the lecture said that human intelligence is too complex to evaluate.
First, human intelligence is multiple. There are a variety of intelligence exist in the human world. For example, someone has linguistic intelligence and the other people have mathematical intelligence.
Second, all human intelligence are not related each other. As I mentioned, a linguistic intelligence and a mathematical intelligence is totally different type of intelligence. So, it can’t evaluate people by just simple test such as IQ test.
In addition, the balance of intelligence is not the same. For example, someone has a high score of IQ test, however, it is not simply connected with mathematical skill.
ところでHumana intelligence って可算名詞なんですか？ a linguistic intelligence かlinguistic intelligenceどっちですか？

回答No.1

Him-hymn · ベストアンサー

Although the reading section claims that it is possible to evaluate people’s intelligence by simply taking IQ tests, according to the lecture, human intelligence is too complex to evaluate.
First, human intelligence varies. There are many kinds of intelligence (that exist) in the human world. For example, someone has linguistic intelligence and another person has mathematical intelligence.
Second, all types of human intelligence are not related to each other. As I mentioned, a linguistic intelligence and a mathematical intelligence are totally different types of intelligence. So you can’t evaluate people by just simply having IQ tests or other kinds of tests.
In addition, the performance of intelligence differs. For example, someone may have a high score of an IQ test, but he may not have great mathematical skills.

ところでHumana intelligence って可算名詞なんですか？
→不可算名詞です。linguistic intelligenceです。

以上、ご参考になればと思います。

回答No.2

Chicago243

>Although the reading section claimed that it is possible to evaluate people’s intelligence by simply taking IQ test, the lecture said that human intelligence is too complex to evaluate.

ちょっと長ったらしいと思います。

Although the reading section claimed that people’s intelligence can be evaluated by IQ test, we learned from the lecture that human intelligence is too complex to evaluate.

>First, human intelligence is multiple. There are a variety of intelligence exist in the human world. For example, someone has linguistic intelligence and the other people have mathematical intelligence.

multipleは多重とか同じような物が複数ある感じなのでちょっと違うと思います。There are a variety of intelligence existはthere isの構文とexistが意味的に一緒なのでthere is を省くとか工夫をした方がいいと思いますが、個人的にはもっと簡単にして以下のようにまでに縮めても文章が成り立つのではと、、、、

First, human intelligence covers diverse abilities from linguistic to mathematical.

時間がないのでここまでにします。