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(1)最近、日本では毎日のように少年犯罪の報道がマスコミを賑わせている。 (2)しかも罪を犯すのは普通の家庭の普通の子供らしい。 (3)今の子供は他人との距離を取り方が下手だと言われるが、 (4)そのせいか、つまらないことにすぐにキレ、とんでもない事件を引き起こす。 (5)日本は世界もうらやむような豊かな国を作り上げたが、その恵まれた環境が少年犯罪を生んでいるとすれば何とも皮肉だ。 (1)Recently, the mass media have informed people of juvenile crimes every day. (2)Furdermore, I hear it is normal children in normal families that commit crimes. (3)It is said that current children are poor at keeping others at a distance. (4)Because of that, they get angry about trivial things and cause an unexpected cases. (5)Japanese people built a rich country which people in the world envy, but if it is the cause of juvenile crimes, that is really ironic. ・(3)(4)は１文を２文に区切ったものです、大丈夫でしょうか。 ・恵まれた環境はそのまま訳してしまいましたが意味は通じますか。 またマズい点などございましたらご指摘ください。 よろしくお願いします。
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(1)Recently, (削the) mass media [have informed→inform完了でなく習慣行動と解釈します] people of juvenile crimes every day. (2)Fur[d→th]ermore, I hear[,] it is (不要normal) children [in normal→from ordinary] families that commit [such] crimes. (3)It is said that current children are poor at keeping [others at a distance→good relationsips with others物理的に「離れる」ことではなく「よい関係を維持する」こと]. (4)Because of [that→this], they (quickly) get angry about (most) trivial things and cause (削an) unexpected [cases→troubles犯罪以前と解釈]. (5)Japanese people [have完了] built [such] a rich country [which→as] people in [the world→other countries日本以外] (would) envy[, but→. But] if [it→this] is the [cause of→reason for] (our) juvenile crimes, [that→this] is really ironic (for us). ・(3)(4)は１文を２文に区切ったものです、大丈夫でしょうか。 大大丈夫 ・恵まれた環境はそのまま訳してしまいましたが意味は通じますか。 そのまま？
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