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> the dorm was silent the new school term has started the new school term had started. かな ＞As soon as I felt someone walking in the back of the dorm, it's soon lost in the sounds of the wind. 代名詞のitに代わる名詞、句、節が見当たらない。 As soon as I felt the sound of waking in the back of the dorm, it's soon lost in the sounds of the wind. であればit=the sound Formerlyは主節のIt seems ~に掛かるは。とすると、 Formerly and now It seems thatの構文になってしまう。 従属節のthough I ~句でれば、 though I frequently heard ~ somewhere (before). beforeは無くてもよいと思う。
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