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100パーセントの正確性はありませんが私なら下記のように修正するでしょう。 Commiting suicide was not among the leading causes of death until recently. However, it has been one of the biggest social issues in Japan. Suicide is the No 1 cause of death among men aged 20-45 and women aged 15-30. The number of poeple who commited suicide in 2005 amounted to 32,552, which is approximately 5 times as many as the traffic death toll in the same year. This means that 90 people commit suicide a day, or one person commits suicide every 16 minutes. It is said that 10 times as many people attempted suicide as actually commited. Given these facts, this is not just an affair of other people. Some of them suffer from serious depression due to stress. It is proven that they develop a variety of symptoms like.... Thinking about suicide or death is considered to be one of them. As a matter of fact, middle-aged and senior adults most likely commit suicide. People in this age group are facing losing their jobs and salary cuts far ahead of ohter age groups. あと、4分割ぐらいして投稿したほうが解答がつきやすいですよ。
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