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日本の大学受験をしたことが無いので、採点方式は分かりませんが、文法が間違ってるもしくは不自然と僕が判断したのだけ指摘しておきます。 >...there is a tendency that prices are rising... ...tendency for prices to rise >and these changes influence people who are makers or consumers directly. ->and these changes influence the manufacturers and the consumers directly. phenomenomens ->phenomenons > there would be in a trouble and a competition. "in a trouble"では何が言いたいのかがよく分かりません。主語を考えてみてください。(誰が苦しむのか) >Firet of all -> First of all >Rising prices would do damage to financial of each home.Peoples come to avoid buying rising goods. ->...would cause financial damage to every household, which would then not be able to buy much goods. >Second, there would be a competition between businesses. competition-> competitions >A big company would adapt to their surroundings to make the prise as low as possible , but a small company could not do . Then it would go bankrupt . ->Big companies would be able to adapt to the new market and still make the prices of their goods as low as possible. However, most small companies would not be able to do so, which would result in their bankrupcy. >For these reasons , price stability is important so that keep social stability . ->.....price stability is crucial in keeping social stability. > However , the more international the world become , the more difficult it is for prices to remain . ->.....the more international the market becomes, the more difficult it will be to stabilizie the prices.

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