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質問者様の英作を訳してみます。 「みんなある共通の国際言語を学ぶべきだと思います。しかし、世界の他の多くの言語を取り除く(排除する)と言うことではありません。(今)多くの言語が月毎、年毎に失われています。だから、私達は他の多くの言語を守れなければなりません。加えて、私達はある国際共通言語を話す必要があります。もし、私達が国際共通言語を知らなければ、私達は違う言語を話す人々と会話できません。」 “加えて”という言葉の前後で、意味が矛盾しているのがお分かりでしょうか？ #1さんが ＞In addition, we need to ・・・・・・ 世界共通語を学ぶ必要がある が論旨の趣旨ですから、この部分を 最初に持ってくるべきだと思います。 と指摘されている通り、この部分を先に書くべきでしょう。私なら長いですけど I think that everone should learn to speak one common international language. The reason is that if there is a paticular language which all of us in the world can understand, we can communicate between people in the world, even though mother languages are different. However, to use one common international language does not mean that we make light of other languages. I know that many languages have been disappearing all over the world day by day, indeed. Therefore, we should also regard these languages. とします。 細かいことを言うと languageは可算名詞。canの否定形はcan'tかcannot。conversationは名詞だからhave a conversation。
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日本語訳を見て、意味が矛盾してるのが分かりました。気をつけます。 書き換えの文章を参考にしっかり復習しておきます！ ありがとうございました。