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In fact, the residents of the bulletin on Network that unspecified large number people to write is limited only 8 people in the movie.
The bulletin on Network is originarry many slander, but the director changed　it to support and serious comment.
I though it is not real, but it seems to need work to became purely love story, and I think it is successful.
The original character that made the director has personality and it become interesting story.

「実際に不特定多数のネットワーク上の掲示板の住民は、映画ではわずか８人に絞られました。
ネット上の掲示板は多くの中傷コメントがありますが、監督は応援や真面目（純粋）なコメントに変えました。
それは現実的ではないですが、純粋なラブストーリーにするには必要な作業だったと思うし、それは成功していると思う。
監督の作った８人のキャラクターには個性があり、話をより一層面白くさせていた。」

よろしくお願いします。

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In fact, the residents of the bulletin on Network that unspecified large number people to write is limited only 8 people in the movie.
⇒ In the real world, there are huge number of anonymous netizens who access and post their messages to popular SNSs (bulletin boards on SNS), but the director created one in the movie which seems to have only eight users.
掲示板はbulletin board。短縮してBBS (bulletin board system)と言う言葉もありましたが今は殆ど死後になっているので、SNSで良いのではないかと思います。

The bulletin on Network is originarry many slander, but the director changed　it to support and serious comment.
⇒ Usually SNS is filled with negative messages to abuse somebody else, but the SNS in the film has earnest and supportive messages.

I though it is not real, but it seems to need work to became purely love story, and I think it is successful.
⇒ That may not happen in a real SNS, but I think the SNS is necessary for this pure love story and I think the attempt is successful.

The original character that made the director has personality and it become interesting story.
⇒ Each user of the SNS is attached with unique personality by the director, and that contributes to make the story interesting.

お礼

掲示板はbulletin boardから短縮してBBS なんですね！！
知らなかったです。
SNSでいいんですね。
添削していただいた文章使わせていただきます。
ありがとうございました！！