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OKと思います。 fish、deer、 sheep、などは群れるので単数形での表現をご存知のようなので特別な説明は必要ないようですね。 飾りをつけて We (strongly) hope that many fish will return to this river (next year). あるいは that を抜いて We hope many fish will return to this river. という表現もありそうですが基本は原文のままで良いと思います。
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- marbleshit
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We hope that many fish will return to this river. hope節内で、より切実な願望を表す場合には、 willという未来形助動詞は用いません。 We hope that many fish returns to this river. がより相応しい表現です。
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- oignies
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fishが特別な名詞だったきがするので、manyじゃなくa lot ofをつかったほうが いいかもしれないけれど、okとおもいます。 fiｓｈを辞書でひいて不可算名詞Uncountableのuがついていたらa lot ofを つかうべきですが。ご自身でたしかめてくださいｌ。
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