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My Dream Destination: Okinawa

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If I could travel anywhere, I would like to go to Okinawa with my friends. When I was in high school, I couldn't go to a school trip to Okinawa. Since I looked forward to the trip so much, I took many books with me to make plans to see beautiful spots in Okinawa and get something nice for my family. However, I had been sick for three days right before I left for Okinawa. After my flights, I got sick from a cold again, so I couldn't go out to see any beautiful seas and buy some presents for my family in Okinawa. Therefore, I have no memory of the trip to Okinawa even though most of my friends talk a lot about the trip, saying that they want to visit Okinawa again. This makes me want to enjoy taking a trip in Okinawa. If I could travel in Okinawa, I could make a lot of memory with my friends. こんな感じですかね。文法ミスはそれほど無いですが、あまり自然で読みやすい文章ではなかったですね。それと、全体を通して意味が分からないところがあったので、勝手に文章を追加して意味が通るようにしました。この私が訂正した文章と自分のを見比べて、また質問があるようなら書き込んでみてください。なるべく答えようと思っています。

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so much make plans get something nice this makes me ここで使うのですね。とても参考になりました。 こんなにすっきりした文章になるのですね。 一人で納得して頷いていました…。ありがとうございます。

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