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それでは、なぜ先進国の中でも日本が最長寿国になったのだろうか？ Then why would Japan become a most longevity country in developed nations? 日本とその他の先進国では、以下のような違いが存在する。 There are some following differences between Japan and other nations. １、主要な死亡原因の違い the differences of main cause of death 左の図は日本とアメリカにおける脳血管障害（三大疾患の一つ）による死亡率の比較である。 The left data is a comparison of the death rate by the cerebrovascular disorder (one of the three major illness) in Japan and U.S.A. 見て分かるとおり、日本はアメリカの二倍近くの死亡率となっている。 Japan's death rate is double as much as the American as you can see. これは、この病の主な原因が高血圧であり、日本人は他国に比べて高血圧になりやすいためである。 A main cause of this illness is high blood pressure, and that is because the Japanese is easy to suffer from high blood pressure in comparison with the other countries. 右の図は日本とアメリカにおける心疾患（三大病の一つ）による死亡率の比較である。 The right data is comparison of the death rate by the heart troubles (one of the three major illness, too) in Japan and U.S.A. アメリカは日本の5倍以上の死亡率となっている。 American death rates is 5 times as much as Japanese. これは、イタリアやフランスなどの、魚介類摂取量が比較的多い国を除く多くの先進国に当てはまる。 This applies to many developed nations except the nations such as Italy or France which intake many fishery products. この病の主な原因は高コレステロールであり、一般的に欧米諸国は日本に比べて高コレステロールである。 A main cause of this illness is high cholesterol. American and European countries are generally high cholesterol in comparison with Japan. ２、食生活 Eating habits 日本人と欧米人との平均寿命の違いには食生活が大きく関与している。 The eating habits have a big effect on the difference of the life expectancy of Japan and American and European countries. 一般的に欧米人の食生活は肉類、つまり動物性脂肪が中心となっており、魚介類の摂取量は低い。 As for the eating habits of Westerners, meat plays a key role, and the intake of fishery products is generally low. 一方和食は、野菜や魚介類が豊富である。 On the other hand, Japanese food have abundant vegetables and seafood.
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とりあえず下記のように書いてみました。 ＞Then why would Japan become a most longevity country in developed nations? Then why did Japan become the world's top country for longevity. ＞There are some following differences between Japan and other nations. someはいらない、もしくは Differences between Japan and other nations are as follows: ＞the differences of main cause of death 1, The difference in leading causes of death. ＞The left data is a comparison of the death rate by the cerebrovascular disorder (one of the three major illness) in Japan and U.S.A. The diagram shown in the left is the comparison of death rates between Japan and US caused by ... ＞Japan's death rate is double as much as the American as you can see. As you can see, Japanese death rate is two times as high as Americans. ＞A main cause of this illness is high blood pressure, and that is because the Japanese is easy to suffer from high blood pressure in comparison with the other countries. The main cause of this illness is high blood pressure, and that is because the Japanese is more likely to suffer from high blood pressure than poeple in other countries. A main cause でもいいです。One of main causes でもいいです。 ＞The right data is comparison of the death rate by the heart troubles (one of the three major illness, too) in Japan and U.S.A. The diagram shown in the right is the comparison of death rates between Japan and US caused by .. ＞American death rates is 5 times as much as Japanese. Americans death rate is 5 times as high as Japanese. ＞This applies to many developed nations except the nations such as Italy or France which intake many fishery products. This applies to many developed nations except the nations such as Italy and France which have higher intake(s) of fishery products. ＞American and European countries are generally high cholesterol in comparison with Japan. In US and Europe, people (are said to) consume more high-cholesterol food than Japan. ＞The eating habits have a big effect on the difference of the life expectancy of Japan and American and European countries. Eating habits make a difference of life expectancy between Japan, America and European countries. ＞As for the eating habits of Westerners, meat plays a key role, and the intake of fishery products is generally low. As for the eating habits of Westerners, meat is their main diet, and thier intake of fishery products is generally low. ＞On the other hand, Japanese food have abundant vegetables and seafood. have を has に。
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日本→魚介類や野菜を多く摂取する食文化で、心疾患の発症が極端に抑制される。 In Japan, the onset of the heart trouble is extremely restrained by Japanese food culture which intakes a lot of fishery products and vegetables. 一方、塩分の摂取量は多いため、これが脳血管障害を引き起こす原因となっている。 On the other hand, it cause cerebrovascular disorder because Japan has many intakes of the salt. ところが、脳血管障害の最大の原因である高血圧が治療可能になったことから、これによる死亡者を減らすことに成功 However, it is succeeded to reduce the death rate by this because the high blood pressure which causes the cerebrovascular disorder can cure. 欧米諸国→肉類中心の食文化で、高コレステロールにより高い確立で心疾患が引きこされる。 In the American and European countries, a heart trouble is caused by their meat-centered food culture which is based on high cholesterol. よって、たまたま日本が先進国の中で世界一の長寿国となった。 As a result, Japan happens to became a world's top longevity country in developed nations.
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英語文の添削お願いします# 一部だけでもとてもありがたいです＃＃ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 日本人の平均寿命が劇的に上昇した理由として以下のことが考えられる。 The following is motioned as the reason why a Japanese life expectation rose up dramatically. １、子供の死亡率の大幅な抑制 1, the large decreasing of the death rate of the child 戦後栄養状態が良くなり、抗生物質の開発などによる感染症治療の進歩により特に乳幼児死亡率が激減したため。 It is because a nourishment state improved after the WW2, and the infants death rate decreased sharply by progress of the infectious disease treatment by the development of the antibiotic in particular. ２、青壮年期の死亡も減少 2, decreasing of the death rate for adult people 青壮年期での死亡の大きな原因となっていた結核の治療薬が開発されたこと。 A therapeutic drug of Mycobacterium tuberculosis, which is the big cause of the death have been developed. ３、40歳以上の、所謂生活習慣病による死亡者の減少。 The decreasing of the death those who is older than 40 years old by so-called lifestyle related disease 国民皆保険制度が導入され、誰でも容易に医療の恩恵を受けることが出来るようになった。 The health insurance was introduced to every nation, and anyone got to take a medical treatment easily. 現在65歳以上の人の将来の死亡原因となる疾患は、四大死因が三分の二を占める。 The diseases which will cause the death in the future for the people older than 65 years old are the four major cause of deaths, and two-thirds of the death is caused by them. 乳児死亡率が低減し、結核が克服された現在、生活習慣病の予防が最も重要な課題と考えられる。 Infant mortality decreases; Mycobacterium tuberculosis was overcome. now, the prevention of the lifestyle-related disease is regarded as the most important issue.
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問題 (1)．(2)の指す内容を日本語で書きなさい (3)の後、省略された二語を英語で書きなさい。 -------------------------------- Nationalism runs rampant throughout the world and quite naturally is particularly strong among new and developing nations,not very sure of their own identity. unconscious racial and cultural arrogance and disdain for other is pronounced throughout (1)『the west』. Chinese feelings of cultural superiority are monumental,deriving as they do from a three thousand year tradition. but the japanese sense of distictiveness-not necessarily of superiority or even of nationalism but of just being different-is itself very distinctive. Many Japanese might be hurt or at least puzzle by (2)『this assertion』. They feel themselves to be extremely international,and in some ways (3)『 they are』. ------------------- 私の答えは (1)中国文化の優越感は 彼らがした３０００年の伝統からきていること。 (2)日本の特有の感覚は、必ずしも優れる必要はなく、にとても特徴のある個々が違う存在は平等な国家主義であるということ。 (3)extremely international です。
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They also value college level and experience in Japan. In the world is becoming more globalization in variety of areas, study abroad has many advantages. They also value college level and experience in Japan. In the world is becoming more globalization in variety of areas, study abroad has many advantages. In my friend case, she go to college in the United States, and this opportunity will brings precious experience such as language, confidence, diversity. 「日本では大学のレベルや経験が重視される。様々なエリアにおいて世界はよりグローバリゼーション化おり、海外留学は多くの利点を持っている。私の友達の場合、彼女はアメリカの大学に通っている。そしてその機会は言語、自身、多様性など多くの貴重な経験をもたらしてくれるだろう」 こちらの英文の添削をお願いします。
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死刑制度と貴方の意見について述べなさい。 という課題です よろしくお願いします。 Capital punishment debate I disagree with capital punishment and we had better repeal it. Firstly, what is Capital punishment? it has a long history and now capital punishment debate is one of the human rights issues. Some people agree with death penalty and others disagree with it. And some countries adopt death penalty, such as, Japan, China, Iran, and so on. In Europe, Belarus is only country that adopt death penalty and this country does not belong to EU because she embraces death penalty. Thus this problem is so difficult for human being to solve. Death penalty dose not prevents felonious crimes very much. We often hear the idea that death penalty stop offender killing other people. However, it is not exactly. According to the statistics of murder case in the United States, the number of the murder case in the State which adopts the penalty is larger than that doesn’t adopt it. Also according to a research, in a country where there is the penalty, after they abolished the penalty, the number of murder did not change dramatically. Moreover, a country where there is not the penalty, after they started the penalty, the number did not change hard, either. Thus we can say that death penalty may not have a power to prevent crimes. In spite of these, why there is capital punishment? Is there any meaning that we kill the people who kill other? Maybe not. Offenders should pay for the victims and rehabilitate no matter how long it takes, so it is not good that not only victims but offenders are killed. As the Bible says, we should ‘condemn the offense, but pity the offender.’ It may cause the case where people who kill nobody are killed as a dearth penalty on a false charge. Indeed, there are many cases like this in the world. In Japan, it is not about death penalty, there are, too. In other word, it is an unmistakable murder. However, no one is bad― it is the death penalty that is not good. In conclusion, death penalty has a little benefit and may lead terrible mistakes. And the Law makes offenders not kill but rehabilitate. Therefore I disagree with death penalty and we had better abolish it.
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Essayを書きましたので、添削をお願いします。 特に、文の構成などにアドバイスをいただけるとうれしいです。 テーマは「エネルギー問題について」です Through the Great East Japan Earthquake and the accident of Fukushima NO1 nuclear power plant, public opinions are tending to not to use nuclear power anymore. Thus, the natural power such as, water, wind and solar are attracted by many people gradually. However, the government is not fully agree with abolishing nuclear power. From my point of view, Japan shouldn't rely on nuclear power anymore. Because of the high energy, nuclear power is too hard to control, and once have a trouble with power plant, it leads to the large amount of people death and illness. What's more, the wastes from nuclear power plant can't throw away everywhere, otherwise those wastes pollute the environment. On the contrary, opponents say, if the nuclear power plant will be abolished, whole Japan will be lack of energy. Therefore, the capital of Japan, Tokyo have to carry out scheduled blackout like last summer. Because The main system in many ways like government and economy are all in Tokyo, so blackout leads to Japan's confusion. As far as I am concerned, Japan use too much energy, and you should save them. Everyone's economy is enough to making up the lack of energy. Besides, you can hope Japanese technology of using natural power. Although the large number of technologies are still not in use now, Japanese technician will discover successful way definitely.
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