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どこが間違いか不明です
Juvenile crimes stem from a society adults created, and change laws to merely impose a stricter punishment on young offenders will not get to the root of the problem.という英文を書いてみたのですが、changeの部分があやまりだと指摘されました。どうしてなのでしょうか。
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主語は「～という風に法律を変えること」ですよね？でしたらchangeをchangingもしくはto changeにするように、との指摘だったのではないでしょうか？
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