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質問

１「その母親は娘の代わりにA大学を受験して合格したが、そのあと、それが発覚して入学を取り消された（A大学は入学を取り消した。
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2「彼は友達に運転免許の替え玉受験をさせて免許を取得した。そのあと替え玉受験が発覚して免許を取り消され逮捕された。」
１．「The mother took an entrance examination for University A in place of her daughter and passed it. Then, it was found out, and the entrance to school was canceled.／University A canceled her entrance to school.」
２．「He let his friend do a substitute examination of a driver's license and acquired it. After that/Then, the substitute examination was found out, and the driver’s license was canceled and then he ware arrested. 」
また、「発覚する」をdiscoveredやcame to lightに置き換えることは可能でしょうか？またproxyという単語が代理人（替え玉になる人物）として使うならhave/let his freind take an entrance exam for A university as ~のような形で用いるべきでしょうか？
よろしくお願いいたします。

回答No.1

age9681 · ベストアンサー

The mother took an entrance examination for University A in place of her daughter and passed it. Then, it was found out, and her daughter's entrance to school was canceled.／University A canceled her daughter's entrance to school.
もしくは
Her mother took an entrance examination for University A in place of her and passed it. Then, it was found out, and her entrance to school was canceled.／University A canceled her entrance to school.

He let his friend do a substitute examination of a driver's license and obtained it. After that/later, the cheating was found out, and his driver’s license was canceled and then he was arrested.

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