Tips for Preventing Lifestyle Diseases

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  • By reviewing and improving daily lifestyle habits, you can prevent lifestyle diseases. Focus on diet, exercise, and making lasting changes in your daily routine.
  • Maintain a healthy body weight or lose weight if necessary, and consume alcohol moderately. Additionally, consider following the DASH Diet, which includes a rich variety of fruits, vegetables, and low-fat dairy foods.
  • The DASH Diet, known as Dietary Approaches to Stop Hypertension, has been shown to significantly reduce blood pressure in hypertensive patients.
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By reviewing and improving the daily lifestyle habits, it is possible to prevent them. It is important to focus on diet and physical exercise, change daily life and put it into practice. It is also important to recognize dietary habits, to maintain a healthy body weight or to lose weight in exercise of body overweight, to consume alcohol moderately. There is also DASH Diet. It is Dietary Approaches to Stop Hypertension clinical trial. By taking a rich diet like fruit, vegetables, and low fat dairy foods, blood pressure of hypertensive patients can be greatly reduced. 日本語⇨日々の生活習慣を見直し、改善することで、それらを予防することができる。 食生活や身体的運動にフォーカスを置き、日々の生活を改め実行に移すことが重要である。 それには、健康な体重を維持、または過剰体重の場合は体重を減らし、アルコールは適度に摂取し、食生活を見直すことが重要である。 またDASH Dietというものがある。The Dietary Approaches to Stop Hypertension clinical trial (DASH) fruits, vegetables, and low fat dairy foods(果物、野菜、低脂肪乳製品)のような豊富な食事(diet)をとることで、高血圧の患者の血圧を大幅に下げることができる。 上の英文を添削して欲しいです。 日本語に所々英語がありますが、これをもとに英文を作りました。 よろしくお願いします。

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They can be prevented by reviewing and improving the day-to-day[*1] lifestyle behavior[*2]. To actually bring about a change[*3], and change it for the better[*4], it is important that you focus on [the] diet and on physical exercise, which means recognizing dietary habits, maintaining a healthy body weight, losing weight through exercise if necessary, and consuming alcohol moderately. There is also a DASH Diet, which stands for[*5] Dietary Approaches to Stop Hypertension clinical trial. By taking a rich diet like fruits, vegetables, and low fat dairy foods, blood pressure of hypertensive patients can be greatly reduced. *1: https://eow.alc.co.jp/search?q=day-to-day *2: https://eow.alc.co.jp/search?q=lifestyle+behavior *3: https://eow.alc.co.jp/search?q=bring+about+a+change *4: https://eow.alc.co.jp/search?q=change+for+the+better *5: https://eow.alc.co.jp/search?q=stand+for [句動3.] [ポイント] "focus on diet and physical exercise" という大命題の下に、以下の1.、2.、3.、をもってくると、文章が纏まりやすくなると思います。 1. recognize dietary habits 2. maintain a healthy body weight (and lose weight through exercise if necessary) 3. consume alcohol moderately

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回答ありがとうございます。 そうなんです。 it is important~ という文章が続いて、腑に落ちていなかったんです笑。 ご指摘して頂きありがとうございます。 しかし、やっぱり長い文章を作るのはまだまだ苦手で… 添削大変参考になりました。 ありがとうございます。

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