添削お願いいたします。

質問

youtube についての英文を書いてました。もしよろしければ添削して頂けないでしょうか？？
よろしくお願いいたします。

On the site youtube, before the movie starts advertisement streams for 15 seconds. Although advertisement occasionally streams for more than 15 seconds , you can skip the advertisement after 15 seconds.
On youtube, when Uploaders can receive money at certain state when user click the advertisement attached the movie. Some of them upload their videos for the purpose of getting the money from advertisement and they are called youtuber.
(Some of them aim to receive some money from the advertisement, uploading their video, and they are called youtuber.)

But, there is the situation where the people who earn money from youtube is very few. Also thank to this system for reward, youtuber try to make interesting and fascinating video and these videos make users enjoy.

youtubeでは、動画の再生前に15秒間の動画が流れることがあります。15秒以上の動画も流れるときもありますが、その場合は、15秒後にその広告をスキップすることができます。ユーザーがその広告をクリックすると、アップロードした人に、一定の金額が報酬として支払われます。アップローダーの中には、その報酬目的で動画をアップロードする人がおり、その人のことをユーチューバーと呼びます。しかし実際、利益を上げている人はとても少ないのが現状です。またこのような報酬のおかげで、ユーチューバーがより面白い動画を作ろうとし、ユーザーを楽しませているのも事実です。

回答No.2

nolaneco

自分だったらこう書くという参考です。足しになれば。

When you watch videos on Youtube, sometimes an advertisement
streams for 15 seconds before the video starts. Some advertisements
last more than 15 seconds but in such cases, you can skip them after
15seconds.If a user click a link in the advertisement, certain money
is paid for the person who uploaded the video. Some people upload
videos to earn money by the reward system. They are called Youtubers.
However, in reality, there are few people who can earn money by the
system. Nevertheless, it is also true that Youtubers are making users
enjoy by their effort of making their videos more and more fascinating.

回答No.1

nolaneco

On the site youtube(単に the site いらないかも), before the (movie⇒videoに統一) starts advertisement streams for 15 seconds. Although （anをつける）advertisement occasionally streams for more than 15 seconds , you can skip (the advertisement⇒it) after 15 seconds.
On youtube, （whenいらない） Uploaders (u小文字） can receive (some） money （少し不自然　消すat certain state） when (aをつける) user click the advertisement attached (to) the （movie　⇒ video）. Some （of them これは people にかえる）upload their videos （for the purpose of getting長い　⇒to get） （theいらない） money (from advertisement ⇒ 報酬システムによってby the reward system).(長いのできる） （and） they are called youtuber(sをつける).
(Some of them aim to receive some money from the advertisement, uploading their video, and they are called youtuber.)

But（Ｂｕｔは文頭にあまり持ってこない、However), (there is the situation where the不自然　⇒ in most cases) (few) people (who消す）（can) earn money (from⇒ by　によって) youtube (is very few). Also thank(sをつける） to this (reward)system (for reward簡単に前に持ってくる）, youtuber(sをつける） try to make (their movies) interesting and fascinating (video and these videos make これは消す）(users enjoy ⇒ to enjoy users).

まとめると、
On Youtube, before the video starts, advertisement streams for 15 seconds. Although an advertisement occasionally streams for more than 15 seconds , you can skip it after 15 seconds.
On youtube, uploaders can receive some money when a user click the advertisement attached to　the video. Some people upload their videos to get money by the reward system. They are called Youtubers.

However, in most cases, few people can earn money by Youtube. Also thanks to this reward system, Youtubers try to make their movies interesting and fascinating to enjoy users.

あくまでも一意見で絶対ではないので。