エッセーの添削をお願いいたします。 -エッセーを書いてみたのですが、自分だ-

良いエッセー

質問なのですがパトス、エソス、ロゴスのどれか一つを使った二つのCMを比べるというテーマで少しながめのエッセーを書こうとしています。いきなり書き始めるよりoutlineを書いてからのほうが書きやすいと思いまずoutlineを作ってみたのですが、Bodyでのうまい書き方やアイデア、conclusionでのmain　pointの要約と自分の意見をうまく書く方法がいまいち良くわかりません。そこでなにか良い書き方やアイデアがあれば教えていただけないでしょうか？ちなみにこれがoutlineです。 Introduction: From old to current advertisements, logos has been used to convince consumers that the product is reliable, honest, and credible. Thesis: 1960 DHC and 2006 Clearasil skin care lotion advertisements both used the same marketing strategy; however, they have different way of advertising. Body A. Similarities between the two ads - used logos - attractive models both male and female who have nice skin - men or women model showed off and touched their skin with saying “My skin is so smooth!” Transition sentence: to show that differences will be mentioned starting with the first, old advertisement. B. Differences: DHC Brief description of the DHC advertisement and show - two women - target group- women who want beautiful and clear skin - two women boast the number of users, how many products is sold, and success stories of users. - the advertisement do not use fantasy in a comic book or video game mode. Transition sentence: to show that differences will now be mentioned starting with the second, current advertisement. C. Differences: Clearasil Brief description of the Clearasil advertisement and show - one real man and one unreal woman (video game or comic book character) - target group- men who want nice skin - the advertisement explains scientifically why the product is extremely effective for their skin. - the advertisement uses fantasy in a comic book or video game mode. Conclusion: DHC and Clearasil advertisement both used logos that gives consumers the evidence and statistics to fully understand what the product does. There　difference in the two advertisements though they used same marketing strategy. My thought:It need copyright royaltys and represent fee to use a ainme character in commercial or ads. and using a anime character in ads can make more close to people,and the character have the deep impression in people's mind.and it is easily make people associate the character with the goods in ads.On the whole,it is a ads trick,it seems to be called Image spokesperson. よろしくおねがいします。

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文法だけでなくここはこう言ったほうがいいんじゃない？みたいなのもありました、どうぞ教えてください。 Education System of Two Countries It is the common objective of educational system in any countries to foster its citizens to become productive members of its society. Every country has its own education system. Two countries United States and Japan have also their own education systems. After World War II, the Japanese education system was built based on American's education system, so the education system in the United States and Japan have a lot in common fundamentally. American and Japanese educational principle is similar; however, the entrance processes are quite different. At first glance, pursuing university education of American and Japanese universities appears to be straightforward. The basic system seems to be identical. Both countries have two-year university, four-year university and technical school. Students enter college after they have graduated from high school, or simply demonstrate their ability to get higher education. Students can take any classes that they wish to take and they are free to devote most of their time to education. Both countries put from 6 years to 15 years old children under an obligation to be taken education. Even though American and Japanese university basic system seems to be identical, the entrance processes are vary significantly. In America, compared with Japanese university, it is easy to enter university. Students do not have to take the admission examination for entrance, but all students need is just submit the required documents like high school transcript. So students need to get good grade in high school. When students enter university, they are not required the good academic skills. However, it is difficult to get units and graduate from university, because they have to show their good skills in the class, so not a few students who can’t get the units and it take much time to graduate. In short, students who want to enter American university need to study hard after entering university. On the other hand, at Japanese university, it is difficult to enter university. Students have to take admission examination instead of submitting the required documents to enter. For Japanese universities, it differs from American universities in that you need to take an entrance exam for the specific university. If you pass the exam then your high school grades don’t matter at all. In short, contrary to American university, students who wish to enter Japanese university need to study hard before entering university. To conclude, while basically, American and Japanese education system are similar, the entrance processes to enter university are poles apart.

どなたかこの文章を修正していただけないでしょうか？

英語を勉強しているのですが、writingが苦手なので自分でお題を決めていろいろ書いています。この前外人の方に見せたら次のような指摘をされました。（ちなみにこの文章のお題はパトスかエトスかロゴスのうちどれかひとつが使われているCMを二つ選んで説明するというものです） I：we,our,usなどの第三者の名詞やIは使わないほうが良い。 II：Controlling　Ideaが無い＝Thesisが短すぎる。 III：(1)、(2)、(3)の文は英語ではこういう表現はしない。 IV：引用が多すぎるからもっとparaphrazeしたほうがいい。本文 We always watch TV, internet or magazine commercials without thinking deeply about them. But there are various strategies that are used in commercials. Two commercials featuring ZOTRIM Diet Supplement and DHC Skin Care Lotion used ‘logos.’ Logos means persuading by the use of reasoning, evidence or concrete numbers and that is an appeal is based on making a person’s life better or easier. ZOTRIM advertised “This is 100% natural!” and “10 million people are using this! “ These messages arouse people’s interest and encourage people to buy it by representing concrete number. DHC Skin Care Lotion also used ‘logos.’ In the commercial two girls advertised “(1)This product is No.1 sales in all over the world!” and introduced success voice of users. (2)These messages mean almost people use this lotion and they can get clear and smooth skin like users if they use it. (3)Almost people who watched these logical commercials will buy these products, because the more there are evidence, reason, or concrete number, the easier people believe. This strategy used in both ZOTRIM Diet Supplement and DHC Skin Care Lotion appealed to logic or reason and whip up their interest or emotion by showing good parts of the products with concrete number, evidence, and results of survey. よろしくおねがいします。

エッセイの添削をお願いします！

高校で資料を参考にして、エッセイを書く課題が出ました。一度書いてみたので添削をお願いします！ ※文章構成(firstly, secondly In conclusion と　最初のパラグラフと最後のパラグラフとの内容が被ること)に関しては学校からの指示なので、そのままでお願いします。以下 People had better be concerned about climatic change for ecosystem. It is global warming that one of the things that are in question most and most influential. These days, the affect the impact of global warming has been serious in Arctic. If we took preventive measures against it thoroughly, the animals on the ice in Arctic, such as, polar bear and earless seal, would be threatened with extinction. Firstly, according to the report from Nasa in 2005, the amount of sea ice that floats in the chilly arctic is much less than what it used to be. In other words, this report says that the environment which they can live on is not what it used to be. Secondly, the report says that each year, during the month of September, the amount of sea ice floating in the Arctic Ocean is typically at its lowest amount for the entire year. That year, and all the way back to 2002, the amount of sea ice has been 20% less than the average amount seen normally between 1979 and 2005. That is to say, it shows that the place which it is possible for them to live on has gradually decreasing. In the future, it and they may perfectly disappear. In conclusion, we had better think of what global warming affect them and need to immediately start working out solutions for this problem. Otherwise, they will really have died out by mankind. 以上 ‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐‐ ※念のために言いたいことを大まかに日本語で書いておきます※ ^－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－人々はもっと生態系のためにも気候変動について気にかけるべきである。もっとも影響があり問題となっているのが地球温暖化だ。近年、北極での地球温暖化は深刻化してきている。もし私たちが徹底的に地球温暖化を防がなければ、ホッキョクグマやアザラシなどの北極で生活する動物たちが絶滅の危機に瀕することになるかもしれない。　第一に、NASAの2005年に調査によると、「資料抜粋：the amount of sea ice that floats in the chilly arctic is much less than what it used to be. This report says that it is probably because of warmer arctic temperature.」言いかえれば、このレポートは彼ら(北極に住む動物)の住む環境が昔と変わってきていることを示している。次に、この調査は「資料抜粋each year, during the month of September, the amount of sea ice floating in the Arctic Ocean is typically at its lowest amount for the entire year. That year, and all the way back to 2002, the amount of sea ice has been 20% less than the average amount seen normally between 1979 and 2005.」ということを示しています。つまり、彼らが住むことができる場所が徐々に減ってきているということを示します。将来、その場所と彼らは完全に姿を消すかもしれません。要するに、私たちはもっと地球温暖化とそれが与える動物への影響を考え、この問題について対策を練る必要があります。そうでなければ、彼らは人類によって本当に絶滅してしまうかもしれないのです。 ※※※ 学校からの指示としては、自分の意見を Scentists using satellites date have confirmed that the amount of sea ice that flats in the chilly arctic is much less than it used to be , and that's probably because of warmer Arctic temperatures. Earch year, during the month of September, the amount of sea ice floating in the Arctic Ocean is typically at its lowest amount for the entire year. That year, and all the way back to 2002, the amount of sea ice has been 20% less than the average amount seen normally between 1979 and 2005. という資料から二つ根拠をあげて述べろという指示です。長いですが添削をお願いします

[至急]英語プレゼン添削

明日英語でのプレゼンテーションがあります。２つの車広告の比較分析です。添削お願いします。私は前半を担当するので終わり方が中途半端になっていますが大丈夫です。 Today, we would like to discuss two advertisements in this presentation, TOYOTA COROLLA and PORSCHE MACAN. The purpose of this presentation is to deconstruct these advertisements by analyzing each strategy. To accomplish this purpose, we discuss mainly two points. First, we’ll talk about what each advertisement is trying to achieve by analyzing important elements of each ad. And then, we explain about similarities and differences between the ads by comparing these positioning and target segment. Please look at this advertisement. When you look at this, what attract your attention first? Yes, maybe this car jumps into your eyes. This is because it uses the simple beige background and there are no destructions. And the cat on the car is the big feature of this advertisement. By placing the cat on the product, viewers receive the message that this product is comfortable and they can relax every time they drive it. Now, I’d like to move on this advertisement. In this picture, the car is running in the city. And it is focused only on this product car. This is designed for an effect to make the product like a leading role in a city. It expresses people can have confidence in themselves by owning this product. And in this advertisement,“blank” is used effectively to improve visibility and gracefulness. Furthermore, by putting the bland mark here, they succeeded in improving luxury bland image. このプレゼンで、私たちは２つの広告、ひとつはトヨタカローラ、もうひとつはポルシェマカンについて議論したいと思います。このプレゼンの目的はこれら２つの広告の戦略を分析することによって、それらの効果を考えるということです。その目標を達成するために私たちは主に2つのポイントを話したいと思います。まず、それぞれの特徴的なメッセージエレメンツからそれらの意味を分析することによって、それぞれの広告が達成しようとしているものを熟考します。そしてこれら２つの広告をポジショニング、マーケットセグメントの面で比較することによって類似点と違う点を明らかにします。まず、こちらのトヨタの広告を見てください。この広告を見た時には車本体がぱっと目を引きます。それはほかに障害物がなくバックグラウンドもシンプルなベージュだという理由があります。そしてこの広告のもうひとつの特徴は、車の上にいるネコです。このネコというのは怠惰で家にいる動物の象徴であり、車の上にこのネコがいることで快適でリラックスできるというようなイメージを消費者に持たせることができます。そしてこちらのポルシェの広告を見てください。こちらの広告では車は町の中を走っているという設定になっています。そして車だけに焦点が合っていることによってこの車が街の主役であるかのように感じさせることができます。そしてこの2ページのなかに大きな空白があることもこの広告の大きな特徴です。広告における余白は見る人に商品に対する高級感を与えることができます。そしてそこにポルシェのブランドマークがあることで、ポルシェがいかに高級感のあるブランドかということを伝えています。

エッセイの添削をお願いします

エッセイを書きました、添削をお願いします。 With the development of information technology, more and more people get easier ways to access valuable information than before. TV, radio, newspaper and Internet are main tools that you can get Information in every seconds and minutes. However, the increasing of information quantity bring about the increasing of fake information. Internet is often thought by people as a mother of fake news, and what TV or radio broadcasting is truth. But, because of TV and radio didn't fully broadcast the truth witch Tokyo electric power company had made last year, people have hesitated eyes to watch the TV news recently. What's more, newspaper also have problems. For example, an article about interviews, under the limited of latter number, it ofter cut the interviewee's words. Therefore, people are easier to misunderstand what the article indicating. From my point of view, every information senders should change their behavior. On the one hand, they mustn't send information with someone's private opinion. On the other hand, each senders have to choose information which people are really desiring.

エッセイ（添削希望）

お願いします Do you think there are fewer stigmas against people with psychological disorders than in the past? Among whom? Why? に対するエッセイを以下の通り書きました。ご面倒ですがどなたか文法を添削頂けると助かります。また文中にwhy?と入れてみたのですがAccademicなエッセイに挿入するにはふさわしくないでしょうか？ Although there were biases against people with psychological disorders in the past decade or so in Japan, nowadays almost all Japanese understand what psychological disorder is. If people know someone he or she suffer psychological impairment, people would devote the fullest energies to help them. Almost all Japanese are cooperative manner. Why? I can think of two reasons. First, we can know what the heart problem is or how should we deal with it by TV, book and radio. Japanese government tries hard to keep everyone informed about disorders. Second, In Japan, over 30000 people are killed by themselves every year. This disorder is one of major risk factor for suicide. For these reasons, almost all Japanese understand and try to help them.

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youtube についての英文を書いてました。もしよろしければ添削して頂けないでしょうか？？よろしくお願いいたします。 On the site youtube, before the movie starts advertisement streams for 15 seconds. Although advertisement occasionally streams for more than 15 seconds , you can skip the advertisement after 15 seconds. On youtube, when Uploaders can receive money at certain state when user click the advertisement attached the movie. Some of them upload their videos for the purpose of getting the money from advertisement and they are called youtuber. (Some of them aim to receive some money from the advertisement, uploading their video, and they are called youtuber.) But, there is the situation where the people who earn money from youtube is very few. Also thank to this system for reward, youtuber try to make interesting and fascinating video and these videos make users enjoy. youtubeでは、動画の再生前に15秒間の動画が流れることがあります。15秒以上の動画も流れるときもありますが、その場合は、15秒後にその広告をスキップすることができます。ユーザーがその広告をクリックすると、アップロードした人に、一定の金額が報酬として支払われます。アップローダーの中には、その報酬目的で動画をアップロードする人がおり、その人のことをユーチューバーと呼びます。しかし実際、利益を上げている人はとても少ないのが現状です。またこのような報酬のおかげで、ユーチューバーがより面白い動画を作ろうとし、ユーザーを楽しませているのも事実です。

自由英作文を添削してください！

慶応義塾大学の自由英作です、この大学の問題は解いたことがないので分かりません。何について書くかというとまず状況から言うと、地元の高齢者ハウスを応援するために、二人の高校生がポスター何枚か学校に掲示します。でも、少人数しか集まらなくてはじめられない。指示が、どのようにしたら人数を集めることができるかということです。　ポスターの内容　・場所がかいてあり　・日時が毎週日曜・９時から　　・人数２５人　・活動内容は、話し相手、食事の補助、散歩の付き合いなどです　条件があって　　　・生徒たちはなぜ少ししか応じてくれなかったのか。　　　・どういう行動をとるべきか。　　　・なぜその行動がうまくいくとかんがえるのか。指定語数は１００語です。僕は１３６字書きました。よろしくおねがいします。 Recently there has been a few young people who are interested in volunteers for caring elderly people. This is why, only a few students responded. I think that there are many things which they can in order to gather people. I think that they should interest people who are indifferent to the volunteer activity.For example , they talks eagerly over it with their friends in person. Then , I would like to mention poster. First, I think they change a.m.9:00 to a.m.10:00.This is because young people are poor at getting up early.when they are used to doing it, they should return to a.m.9:00 . I also think they should draw pictures and make it colorful in order to attract people. It is the most important thing is to convey their passion.

エッセイ（添削希望）

お願いします、以下文法をチェックいただけませんでしょうか。 According to Richard A. Kasschau in Understanding Psychology, the diverse talking and learning psychotherapeutic methods, the remedy combat sufferer who is still socially adaptive people. the other people are ineffective who cannot good judgment or inflict harm on themselves or others. Schizophrenic patient are administered antipsychotic medicine. It is most noted for the drug of schizophrenic disorder is phenothiazines. It includes Thorazine and Stelazine.

急：添削をお願いします！

英作文の問題ですが、自分で回答を作成しまたが自信がないので添削を宜しくお願い致します。 (1)（問：子供たちはかわいい二つの理由がある）一つ目の理由は、子供たちは心身とも清純である。二つ目の理由は、子供たちは大人に無邪気な質問をしてくる。 In one reason, they are pure in body and mind. In two reason, they ask adults harmless question. (2)（問：人々がコーヒーを好きなのには二つの理由がある）一つ目の理由は、コーヒーを飲むことにより眠気を取り除くことができる。二つ目の理由は、苦い味が好きなのである。 In one reason, they can shrug off sleep to drink coffee. In two reason, they like to taste bitter. (3)（問：運動を楽しくするにいくつの方法がある）例えば、一人で運動するのではなく二人ですれば飽きずに運動をすることができるまた、運動中にiPhoneで音楽を聞くやり方もある。 For example, there is a way that you exercise not alone but a pair. Also, there is a way that you listen to music by iPhone while exercising. 問題は以上です。お手数をおかけ致しますが、宜しくお願い致します。

英語エッセイ添削お願いします。

Biodiversityの重要性と、その社会への影響を２００語程度にまとめよと出題され、以下のように書きました。 Biodiversity is important in two respects.. First, biodiversity prevents sudden food crisis. Diversity of a species means that it is strong enough to survive. Suppose that we grow genetically same crops made by the clone technology. If one crop gets ill, the other crops will also get ill because they are genetically the same. This may lead to extinction of the whole species and we will face a world-wide food crisis. Second, biodiversity will leave us the possibility of curing for some serious diseases. Scientists have only succeeded in studying less than one percent of species of plants, animals and insects living on the earth though there are more than 10 million of them. The diversity is so great. But they are on the verge of extinction. We must preserve them because there are possibilities that we will find new kinds of medicine among these unknown species with which we will be able to treat incurable diseases such as cancer, AIDS and so on. We have to prevent these living matters from dying out before we find them. なんか締まらない感じなんですがどうすればいいでしょう?

添削してください

こちらの英文を添削して欲しいです。 The interesting in this movie is train man’s friends never appeared, and he sought to help people that they have never met each other once and only on network. He had not girlfriend before he met “HELMES”, he did not know how to invite her to date. He understand it is shameful things, so he can only to talk with people who do not know each other face. （電車男の友人が一人も登場せず、最後まで彼はネット上の顔も知らぬ人間たちに助けを求めつづけるという部分が面白かった。彼はエルメスに会うまで彼女がいたことがなく、デートの誘い方すらわからない。それがみっともない事だということは理解しており、だから相談できる相手は見知らぬ人しかいない。）・HELMESというのは彼女の名前です。よろしくお願いします。

添削お願いします

They also value college level and experience in Japan. In the world is becoming more globalization in variety of areas, study abroad has many advantages. They also value college level and experience in Japan. In the world is becoming more globalization in variety of areas, study abroad has many advantages. In my friend case, she go to college in the United States, and this opportunity will brings precious experience such as language, confidence, diversity. 「日本では大学のレベルや経験が重視される。様々なエリアにおいて世界はよりグローバリゼーション化おり、海外留学は多くの利点を持っている。私の友達の場合、彼女はアメリカの大学に通っている。そしてその機会は言語、自身、多様性など多くの貴重な経験をもたらしてくれるだろう」こちらの英文の添削をお願いします。

Essayの添削をお願いします。

Essayを書きましたので、添削をお願いします。特に、文の構成などにアドバイスをいただけるとうれしいです。テーマは「エネルギー問題について」です Through the Great East Japan Earthquake and the accident of Fukushima NO1 nuclear　power plant, public opinions are tending to not to use nuclear power anymore. Thus, the natural power such as, water, wind and solar are attracted by many people gradually. However, the government is not fully agree with abolishing nuclear power. From my point of view, Japan shouldn't rely on nuclear power anymore. Because of the high energy, nuclear power is too hard to control, and once have a trouble with power plant, it leads to the large amount of people death and illness. What's more, the wastes from nuclear power plant can't throw away everywhere, otherwise those wastes pollute the environment. On the contrary, opponents say, if the nuclear power plant will be abolished, whole Japan will be lack of energy. Therefore, the capital of Japan, Tokyo have to carry out scheduled blackout like last summer. Because The main system in many ways like government and economy are all in Tokyo, so blackout leads to Japan's confusion. As far as I am concerned, Japan use too much energy, and you should save them. Everyone's economy is enough to making up the lack of energy. Besides, you can hope Japanese technology of using natural power. Although the large number of technologies are still not in use now, Japanese technician will discover successful way definitely.

英作文添削お願いします。

テーマはここ数年のニュースで話題になったものというものです。 I was interested in the news which the age of adult should be lowered to eighteen years old. I agree with this idea. Young people these days are overprotected. They can't know anything about the world. It is true that people in their teens still aren't mentally and physically mature. Manｙ teenageｒ don't have a full time job, live with their parents and depend on their parents, However, this is the reason why the age of adult should be lowered. Someday, they will have to live by their own. If they have to be responsible to everything they do, they will become aware that they should be independent. They would also appreciate their parents. よろしくおねがいします。

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最近、アメリカと日本の大学の教育制度の違いについて、構造はIIntroduction(hookとthesis)→IIBody(1)(似ているところ)→IIIBody(2)(違うところA)→IVBody(3)（違うところB)→VConclusionという形でessayを書いてみたのですがどうも何を言いたいのかが上手く書けていないと感じます。そこで、ぜひこのessayを見てもらって、ここはこういう風にしたほうがいいんじゃないみたいなアドバイスがありましたら、是非教えてください。よろしくお願いします。 essay本文　I.It is the common objective of educational system in any countries to foster its citizens to become productive members of its society. Every country has its own education system. Two countries United States and Japan have also their own education systems. After World War II, the Japanese education system was built based on American's education system, so the education system in the United States and Japan have a lot in common fundamentally. American and Japanese educational principle is similar. However, the entrance processes are quite different. 　II.At first glance, pursuing university education of American and Japanese universities appears to be straightforward. The basic system seems to be identical. Both countries have two-year university, four-year university and technical school. Students enter college after they have graduated from high school, or simply demonstrate their ability to get higher education. Students can take any classes that they wish to take and they are free to devote most of their time to education. Both countries put children of 6 years to 15 years old under an obligation to be a part of education system. III.Even though American and Japanese university basic system seems to be identical, the entrance processes are vary significantly. In America, compared with Japanese university, it is easy to enter university. Students do not have to take the admission examination to enter the universities and all what students have to do is just to submit the required documents such as high school transcript. When students just enter their universities, they are not expected to have good academic skills. However, it is difficult to get units and graduate from university, because they have to show their good skills in the class, so not a few students who can’t get the units and it take much time to graduate. In short, students who want to enter American university need to study hard after entering university. IV.On the other hand, at Japanese university, it is difficult to enter university. Students have to take admission examination instead of submitting the required documents to enter. For Japanese universities, it differs from American universities in that you need to take an entrance exam for the specific university. If you pass the exam then your high school grades don’t matter at all. In short, contrary to American university, students who wish to enter Japanese university need to study hard before entering university. V.To conclude, while basically, American and Japanese education system are similar, the entrance processes to enter university are poles apart. There is no answer which education system is better, but it can be said that education system always should be reviewed to meet student’s needs.

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"Good morning" This is the first step in communicating with people the first time in the morning. Without a greeting will give people uncomfortable feelings. Also, I thought that the director fixed the camera and left the images to the audience. 「お早よう」これが、朝一番に人と交わすコミュニケーションの第一歩。挨拶がないと人に不快な気持ちを与えてしまいます。またカメラを固定することで、イメージを観客に任せているのではないかと思った。こちらの英文を訳してください。よろしくお願いします。

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物語の伝えかたは様々ある。漫画と小説の違いは、漫画はあらかじめ場面が描写されているが、小説は自分で自由に場面を想像する事ができる。共通点は早く読むじっくり読むのはその人次第で、途中で読むのを中断してもよいことだ。あまり時間がないという人は2～3時間で映画を観るという人もいる。 There are different ways to tell stories. The difference between cartoons and novels is that in a cartoon scenes are presented as given to readers, while a novel allows readers freedom of imagining where and how the story unfolds. What they have in common is that it's up to the reader whether to read fast or slow, and that stopping reading is also an option. People with not much time on their hands may opt for movies. Most last no longer than two to three hours.

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A blind date is a date for two people who have never met before. Their mutual friends usually arrange the match. With the rise of the Internet, blind dates are becoming more common than before. Through instant messaging and Internet chat forums, people have a chance to meet people. Blind dating is exciting for some people, but it can be a stressful emotional experience for others. This may be mainly due to a lack of self-confidence and the inevitable fear of meeting an unknown. In the United States, people often talk about the experience of their friends. Some people like to gossip a lot. People who like to gossip often talk about individuals they may not know and that can be hurtful, especially if rumors and gossip continue to be shared. This conversation is between two friends about another friend. In this case, the two friends, Amy and Lisa, having the conversation want the information to remain confidential in order to protect this mutual friend, Toshi. At the end of this conversation, the two friends agree to keep their information confidential. "I've got your back" is a phrase used as reassurance between friends. the phrase is used to show confidentiality, solidarity and trust.

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