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英文が正しいかどうか教えて下さい

下の英文の、おかしな文やアドバイスなどがあれば教えてください。 Second I will state about the study. Now children have to go to school in nine year. We can learn and study that we need things for live. But we can learn not only school but also television and movies. We have education channel for children. Children can learn by watch it. For example, words, vocabulary. But television and movies have more. Movie teaches us important things in story. For example, dream come true and friend. School teacher don’t teach us about it. We learn a lot of things watch television I like watch television about famous people’s success process. And we can learn culture other countries. So I think that television and movies teach us a lot of things. よろしくお願いします。

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ものすごくよくできていると思います。 ほとんどカンペキです。 気になるところだけ、ちょびっと直しますね。 Secondly, I'm going to talk about studying. Children go to school for nine years. At school, we learn and study many things that we need for living. But we can learn not only at school but also from television or movies. We have education channel for children. Children can learn by watching it. For example, words, vocabulary. But we can learn much more from television and movies. Movies teach us important things in the story. For example, dream come true and friends. School teacher doesn't teach us about it. We learn a lot of things by watching television. I like watching television about famous people’s success stories. And we can learn cultures of other countries. So I think that television and movies teach us a lot of things.

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