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英文が正しいかどうか教えてください

この英文におかしい構文やアドバイスなどがあれば教えてください。 First, I will state about dream. Many people have dream. Not only children but also adult. And many people want to work about television. For example, singer, actor, cameraman. I think television give them dream. My friend wants to be actor. So she watches many movies. Anime is popular in my country. Anime is part of television. Anime give many people dream too especially children. This is because children like watching anime. My young sister is always watching anime. We can know many works by watch television and movie. I watched television about introduce work. I like sing a song that watch television and remember song. Therefore, I think television and movie give us dream. よろしくお願いします。

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First, I will talk about dreams. Many people have dreams. Not only children but also adults do. Many people want to work for TV companies. For example, they want to be singers, actors, or camera operators. I think this is because television gives them dreams. A friend of mine wants to be an actor. So she watches many movies. Anime is popular in my country. Anime programs are on television. Anime gives dreams to many people, too, especially to children. This is because children like watching anime. My younger sister is always watching anime. We can learn many things by watching television and movies. I watch introduction parts of television programs. I like theme songs that come at the beginning of many programs. I think television and movies give us dreams. 内容をいじらず、なるべく英語の間違いを正すように添削しました。 ご参考になればと思います。

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