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It is easy to be said you are kind by other people. GOOD! If you want to be the one, all you have to do is use words which do not irritate others and talk on behalf of poor people, the weak so to speak. becauseは理由を伝える言葉です．文章はその方法について語っています． all you have to do is (to)... 不定詞でつなぎます． However, it is not that easy to be really reliable. being kindとbeing reliableが対立するわけではないのでon the other handは不要． believeは言動について使います．「行動が大事だ」と伝えたいのですよね． It is rather easy to be a nice person. All you have to do is to choose moderate words and speak on the side of those who are helpless, the poor. But it is not so if you want to be reliable. 和文の言葉づかいに惑わされずにしっかり大意をつかんで英訳しているところに本物を感じます． めげずに，たくさんこなすことが大事です．がんばれ！
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