writing assignment

質問

お願いします
単語帳カード（って言うのかな？）について先生に提出するのですが文法がどうも苦手で以下英語添削頂けると助かります

Paragraph One
I used vocabulary word cards to review the words in Chapters One, Two, Three and Four.
When I had trouble understanding the meaning of a word, I looked unknown word up in the dictionary.
Then I felt this is important or useful, I added the word in my word cards. Strategy for the enhancement of my English skill is built up the habit of using word cards everyday.

Paragraph Two
The word cards helped me learn and remember the vocabulary from the textbook.
Using word cards over and over again, it led to able to stable my memory. When I looked the word cards, it stimulated my brain cells for memory. therefore, it easy to pick up the words.
Through this method, I would like to increase my vocabulary.

回答No.1

wakkarahen · ベストアンサー

まず、貴英文等について若干のコメント：

Chapter One ... Four となってますが、何に言及かわからないので of the textbook　と付け加えた方がいいでしょう。　また、１－４までをいう必要あるのですか（そのテクストはその他のchapterもあるのですか？だとしたら、なぜ４まで？　ないとしたらchapterに言及する必要ないのでは？）

the words in Chapters ...　だと、全ての単語になってしまいます（the なども含め）。ここでは意味がわからない単語ということですね？

unknown word　について：　an unknown word　か unknown words　に。また、unknown　とは貴殿にとっての意味でしょうから、再考必要あり。

I felt this is ...　となってますが、このthis　が単語を意味することにはならないでしょう。

add A to B のパターン

it stimulated .... it easy to pick up ... は意味不明

全体的に一番問題点は過去形と現在形が混在している点です。内容からして現在形でしょう。

で、貴英文をなるべく活かして試案：

I use (vocabulary) word cards to review important words I come across in the textbook. When I do not understand the meanings of those words, I look them up in the dictionary first, and then if I feel they are important or useful ones, I add them to my cards. The strategy I use to improve my English is to make the most of the word cards by building up the habit of using them everyday.

The word cards help me learn and memorize new words from the textbook. Using the cards over and over again stabilizes my memory of those words. When I look at the cards, they automatically stimulate my brain cells, and I can immediately recall the meanings of the words on them. Through this method, I would like to increase my vocabulary further.

貴内容をベースに試案：

I make the best use of word cards to improve my English vocabulary. When I come across new words in the textbook, I first look them up in the dictionary and then if i think they are important or useful ones I add them to my cards.

The word cards help me learn and momorize new words. I use the cards over and over again to reinforce my memory of those words and their meanings. So, the moment I take a look at the word cards, my brain cells are activated fully, and I can immediately recall with ease what the words on them mean. As the method appears very effective for me, I will capitalize on it from now on too to enrich my vocabulary.

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