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英文にしてみたのですが、あってるかわかりません。 添削しなおして下さい。 おねがいします。 I was going to North Kyusyu at a long time. As I love Kyusyu is one of my sightseeing places,I looked forward to visiting there. Jast the tyhoon. I went to the tyhoon. As a result,The Supace word crosed. I stayed at next Hotel to put in the hot spling to eat nice denner. Next day,The tyhoon went away to Shikoku. Therefor Weather is not good. I visited Dazaifu Tenmangu at the frist time. I went to watch some material in a memorial hall in Dazaifu Tenmangu. And then I went for lunch to be steam the eel in Yanagawa . After that I took the bullet train Nozomi at Hakata station. 久しぶりに北九州に行くことになりました。 九州は大好きな観光地の１つなので、とても楽しみにしていました。 なのに、ちょうど台風が来ていて、台風に向かって行く破目になりました。。・゜゜ '゜(*/□＼*) '゜゜゜・。うわぁ～ん 当然ですが、スペースワールドは閉園です。お隣のホテルで温泉と料理を楽しみました。 二日目は、台風は去ったのですがまだまだ風が強く雨も降っていましたが、大宰府天満宮に行きました。なんと、はじめて行きました。資料館と宝物館も見て回ると１時間以上は必要ですね～ 昼食は柳川まで足を延ばしてうなぎのセイロ蒸を食べました。 そして、博多駅からのぞみで帰って着ました。とさ(*´ェ`*)
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三番です。 In fact Heavy rain and wind welcomed me at Space World. 「直訳」実際、台風の雨と風が私をスペースワールドで歓迎した。 「意訳」スペースワールドでは雨と風による歓迎を受けた。 をあそこの部分に追加(挿入)して下さい。 After long interval I decided to make my visit to Kita-Kyushuu. As Kyushuu is one of the my most favorite place to visit, I really looked forward to it. But, how unlucky I was, I found I was just heading toward the typhoon route on that day. In fact Heavy rain and wind welcomed me at Space World. Instead of Space World closed due to the approaching typhoon, I enjoyed spa and good lunch at neighboring hotel. The next day I visited Dazaifu Tenmangu(Shrine), though it was still raining with strong wind even after the typhoon was gone. To be frank it was my first visit to the Shrine. It took me more than one hour to see the library and museum. Of course, I paid my short visit to Yanagawa where I took my lunch - the famous and so delicious steamed eel bowl. On my return I took Nozomi train from Hakata.
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