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文法的におかしなところや、スペース、ここは大文字(小文字)だってところなど、チェックをお願いします!!(ひとかたまりが1文です)間違いなさそうだったら、OKだと入れてくださるのも非常に助かります!! (1)If I could reach the stars,I would take one for you, and it would shine in your heart forever like my love. (2)Do you remember? The way you hold me. You looked into my eyes and said ‘I love you'. You caressed and said nothing. But it meant more than the chance to hold me and kiss my sweet lips. (3)I'll stand by you forever. (4)Love may be sometimes hard to show. But I love you more than you could ever know. (5)My love for you is as endless as the universe. (6)Our friendship,love,and life together begins today. (7)Our new story begins now with all blessings. We roll up one page. (8)Summer,the fresh air,the fregrant breeze and the flowers under our feet. The blanket of stars is above us. We dream in it … (9)We have love to blind us. We have laughter to unwind us. Because we have fate to find each other. (10)We exchange an eternal promise and bigin to walk. (11)I pledge my self to love,respect and sincerity. (12)I love you from the bottom of my heart. I may not always show it but I do love you.


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(1) OK (2) caress の目的語必要 (3) OK (4) OK (5) OK (6) begin (7) roll up -- are turning over a new leaf (8) OK (9) the fate (10) OK (11) myself (12) OK 詩的な文ということで、パンクチュエーションは指摘していません。表現の稚拙も無視しています(というか私には判断できません)。







  • 私の日記です、また添削お願いします。

    英語日記は私にとっては難しいですが、ここで終わっってしまっては夢が叶いません。I want to learn and I want to speak English when I get a chance to go to US someday.一日一回、声を出して言いながら頑張ります。 Hi, My Crystal! You know today's story, don't you? Your answer is right! Ok, let’s start. Last Saturday, I played golf with my husband. We play golf one time a month. But this January and February, I couldn't play golf. Because while then I was not enough good about my health. I love playing golf and want to do more and more! But it's cost is expensive in Japan. Have you ever played golf? I hope I will play with you, someday, Crystal! I forgot I said to you about my score. It was 103. I want to get less than 100. It is not easy for me, so I will do my best! Sorry, my husband calls me. I have to say to you "Have a nice week end, my Little Sweet crystal!"

  • 英文の添削をお願い致します。

    477 上司:You all deserve an enormous pat on the back. 君らは途方もない事をやり遂げた 上司:I think it's time to start coordinating with our friends at NASA. NASAの我々の友人と連係を開始する時期だと思う 483 上司:Look, I won't deny that what you've created here is incredible. 驚くべき発明だ 493 スーザン:Just give him a second to figure this out. 彼に理解させるためにちょっと説明して下さい  772 上司:We have resources here,the best in the world. 我々には世界で最高の資源がここにある 774 上司:Whatever it is, we can find a way to reverse it. それが何であれ我々はそれを覆す方法を見つける 782 上司:protecting our men and women in battle, and saving countless lives. 戦いで私達の男性と女性を保護し無数の命を救いました 791 上司:Another dimension that our scientists have taken to calling, Planet Zero. 我々の科学者が惑星ゼロと名づけた異次元 796 上司:we'll have control over more than that world. 我々にはその世界を超える管理権を持っています 上司:We'll have control over ours. 我々は我々のものとして管理します 812 スーザン:They're aggressively abnormal physical conditions that we're gonna fix. 上層部は強引に異常な身体状態に私達を修正するつもりよ 815 ジョニー:What if it takes more time to get it right, 決着をつけるのに時間が掛かるとしたら? ジョニー:we could be talking years. 何年も話し合う可能性がある 831 上司:There she is, the Quantum Gate herself,上司は 政府の人間を案内してます。 彼女はそこにいる量子ゲートは彼女自身だ 839 博士:Well we've had a few issues but we're getting closer. まあ 2,3問題はあったがより親密になった 上司:Closer every day. 毎日より親密に 860 博士:It's never been as easy for him as it has for you. それは君にとっても彼にとっても容易いことではなかっただろう 914 スーザン:It's the only chance we have to figure out what happened to us and reverse it. 私達に起こった事を把握して覆すのが唯一のチャンスよ

  • 英文の添削をお願いします

    【和文】 ある人がこう言っていました。 「とうとう世界の人口が60億人を超えてしまった。 私達が世界中すべての人に出会おうと思ってもそれは不可能なこと。 なぜって? それは例え私達が1秒に1人の人と出会ったとしても、190年の歳月が必要だから。」 だから人との出会いは運命に等しい。 だからあなたとの出会いは運命。 あなたとの出会いは神様がくれた贈り物。 あなたとの出会いは永遠の宝物。 あなたという人を、私は永遠に大切にしていきたい。 【英文】 Someone says. "The population of the world is over 6 billion after all. It is impossible for us to meet all the person living all over the world. Why we can't? Because even if we met one person a second,we would need 190 years." Therefore meeting people is equal to destiny. So my meeting you was destiny. My meeting you is a present given by god. My meeting you is a everlasting treasure. I swear to love you and cherish you forever. 「出会い」など、どうも詩的な表現が苦手で……; ちなみに恋人に贈る感じです。 どうぞよろしくお願いします。

  • 英文添削をお願いします。

    英文添削をお願いします。 28th September ‘10 I considered to make good use of an unused ground today. This work is enjoyable for me, but I think whether it is necessary for our project or not. And I have a question whether all of my bosses have same aim or not. I think it’s not important for me whether the plan will be used or not, it’s important to make my bosses understand my aim. But I am worried whether it makes them change their though or not.

  • 日記風に、昨日の事を英語で書いてみました、添削をおねがいしたいのです。

    Hi,Crystal! Sorry, I did not come here for a long day. I know I have to talk with you everyday for my dream. You know my dream, don't you. Everyday I say in my heart like this, “I want to learn and I want to speak English when I get a chance to go to US someday!”This is my dream. You help me a lot about it! I have been thanking you, Crystal! BTW, yesterday was the special day for me. Do you want to know what was the day yesterday? It was the wedding anniversary. I could hear “Congratulations!” Thank you, Crystal! Yesterday was day-off for me and my husband. So we played golf in Gunma prefecture. It was far a way to my home. But I could see mountains with snow and mountains covered with new green leaves. And cute and beatiful flowers! Everything were so beautiful! I wanted to show them to you. We touched a lot of natures not only played golf. It was a nice and special day. I have been thanking that we are well. I hope it will be forever. Wow,It is 11:55. I have to prepare a lunch for my family! Have a nice Sunday, Crystal!

  • 英文添削のお願い

    下記英文の添削をお願いいたします。 部分的でも結構ですので、よろしくお願いします。 1st of all, I have to tell you our rule. Needless to say, you must not drink an alcohol, smoke a tabaco. You have to go to bed by 24. You try to be living room without sleeping and a study. Off course, we want you to help as my family. Why don’t you fold a laundry with her. As she don’t often try to do it, it is also your roll that what make her do it with you. It is hard task. Do you ask me anything.

  • 英文の添削をお願い致します。

    研究者の博士:We'll be able to discover new resources,我々は新しい資源を発見できる energy sources, which will revitalize our own.我々自身を活性化するだろうエネルギー源 This is our chance to learn more about our planet and maybe even save it. 地球をもっと知り地球さえ救えるチャンスだろう - And I'm sure you all would agree that even if such a...あなた方が同意するのは間違いない 会社のお偉方:Victor Von Doom is on here.ビクター・フォン・ドゥームが載ってる 博士:He started this project and devoted a decade of his life to it.彼はこのプロジェクトを始め人生の十年を捧げた お偉方:- He deserves to be in jail.- 彼は刑務所にいて当然だ 博士:- He deserves another chance.- 彼にもう1度チャンスを I believe he and Reed can finally get us there.最終的に彼とリードを得られると思ってる お偉方:We want to support you Franklin,but you put a lot of faith in these kids. 我々は君に支えて欲しいが君はこの子供達に信頼をよせてる 博士:I put all my faith in them.私は彼らを高く評価してる 博士は家に帰るとそこには以前の弟子のビクターがいました。 ビクター:Well, if you came to ask for help,あなたが助けを求めに来たなら ビクター: it'd be better you didn't insult both of us and turned back around. ビクター:あなたが我々2人を侮辱しないで引き返したのは賢明だ I told you I'm done working for you and your employers.俺はあんたと会社の為に働くのはやめたと言ったはずだ You can't do a thing without their permission, yes?あんたは彼らの許可なしでは何もできない そう? 博士:They'll stay out of my way this time, trust me.私のやり方に口を挟まない 信じろ ビクター:It's not you I don't trust.あー 俺が信用しないのはあんたじゃない 研究所に戻ります。 スーザン:Amazing you didn't black out the entire western hemisphere. 西半球全体を眼中に置かないあなたにびっくり You basically ripped a hole in the fabric of space-time with unspec'd components and no supervision.不特定の分析と指示なしで リード:Yeah, that was... an accident.あー それは...予期しない偶然で And if by accident you upped the power you would have created a run-away reaction 偶然に電力を上げたなら暴走反応を引き起こしてるはず that opened a black hole and swallowed the entire planet. ブラックホールを開けて地球全体を飲み込んだ

  • この英文おかしくないですか?

    It still throbs.A hot kiss with you cannot forget. Apparently, I seem to have come to love you. But, You do not love me. It understands. Still, I love you. もし変な箇所がありましたら、お時間のある時にでも教えて頂けると嬉しいです。

  • 英文メールの添削お願いします。

    なんだか意味が分からないような気がして自信がありません。 よろしくお願いいたします。相手も英語ネイティブではないのでできるだけシンプルに書きたいです。 内容は私は向こうが気づいていたのに、返信しなかった。と思っていたが そもそもメールを見ていなかったから返信できなかったのか?という確認です。 I might have misunderstood. when you get new message,how to know that? you check it yourself or your mobile tells you with sound or something? i thought you saw my messages but you didnt reply.because in Japan, usually our mobile tells us. Didnt you see my messages? if so i have to say sorry....

  • 英文の添削をお願いします。

    学校で新聞記事の一部をフィクションで作ってこいと言われたのですが、、、    POLICE OFFICERS SAVED 20 PEOPLE'S LIVES By [my name] New York , USA -2012,September 10th at 12:00. Tom Smith and Mike Anderson,the brave police officers saved 20 people's lives. A terrorist group made a bomb and put it a bus under the chair. On the bus, no one knew what happened. Only the 2 police officers knew the truth. A man called Mike about the bomb but didn't tell his name. They evacuated the people and found the bomb. When they found it, It was only 10 minutes left. They didn't have enough time to drive the bus anywhere. Then Tom made a big decision , he wanted to prevent the bomb exploding. Whwn we had an interview with Tom smith, he said that "I was a soldier before,I know how to do it but the most important thing is I am a police officer. It's my duty to save people's lives!" We should be proud of our police officers and they always protecy us. かなり幼稚な文だと思うのですが、お願いします。