大至急教えてください(;_;)

質問

【至急】ビジネス英文メールのご添削

取引先(派遣先)へ連絡したく英文で作成しましたが、ビジネス的に自信がありません(;_;)
ご添削の程、宜しくお願い申し上げます。

日本語
昨日面接した候補者は今回のポジションが英語環境であること、またこれまでの経験が活かせることに大変魅力を感じております。
今後拡大発展していく御社の一員としてぜひ頑張りたいと申しております。
昨日お伝えした通り、2時面接について彼女は土曜日を希望しています。平日の日中でも調整可能です。あなたのスケジュールが分かりましたら教えてください。

英文
The candidate who interviewed yesterday is very appealing to the fact that this position is the English environment and that she can make use of our experience so far.
She would like to do her best as a member of your company that will expand and develop in the future.
As I reported yesterday, she wants Saturday about the 2 o'clock interview. It can be adjusted even during the day on weekdays. Please let me know your schedule.

回答No.1

skydaddy · ベストアンサー

The candidate who interviewed yesterday is very interested in this position, as the job is under English environment and she can use past experiences for the new job.
She would like to do her best as a member of your company that will expand and develop in the future.
As I reported yesterday, she would like to have the secondary interview on Saturday. It can be arranged even during the day on weekdays. Please let me know your schedule for it.

2時面接は、２次面接として修正しました。