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(1)I think that there are tree main points for giving money to children of parents. 親が子供にお金をあげるとき、3つの(注意する)ポイントがあります。 (2)they can earn money themselves . と they can earn money by themselves. (1)は訳に対する英作文はあってるでしょうか。 (2)は上と下どっちがあってるのでしょうか。 よろしくお願いします。


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  • 回答No.1

長時間だれも回答してませんね。じゃあ,だめもとで書きましょうか(笑)。 (1)(I think) There are three points to be minded when a parent gives money to the child. (2)どっちでも通じそうな気がしますけどね。



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