英文の添削をお願いします。

質問

I can't speak English well enough,and I was here time is shorter than the other guys.
But I was able to spend a wonderful time.
Thank you for all your kindness.
Miss you guys already.

私は英語を充分に話せず、またほかのみんなよりもここで過ごした時間は短いです。
でも素晴らしい時間を過ごすことができました。
皆さん、いろいろとありがとうございます。
すでに皆さんに会いたいです。

回答No.3

Nebusoku3 · ベストアンサー

I can't speak English well enough,and I was here time is shorter than the other guys.
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I am not good at speaking English, and the time I shared with you was shorter than all of you (又はother people).

But I was able to spend a wonderful time.
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OKと思います。

Thank you for all your kindness.
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Thank you for all of your kindness.

Miss you guys already.
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すでに　が　すぐに　の意味であれば
I would like to see all of you soon.

お礼

遅くなり申し訳ありません。
回答ありがとうございます！
とてもわかりやすく助かりました！

回答No.2

cbm51901

I DON'T speak English well enough and BESIDES, THE TIME I SPENT HERE was shorter than FOR YOU guys.
EVEN SO, I was able to spend a wonderful time.
Thank you for all your kindness.
I AM ALREADY STARTING TO to miss you guys.

◆I can't / I don't どちらでもOKですが...。
◆"and besides," → 「またさらに、」
◆"the time I spent here" → 「ここで過ごした時間」
◆"Even so," → 「それでも」
◆"I am already starting to miss you guys." → 「もうすでにみんなのことが恋しいです。」

お礼

遅くなり申し訳ありません。
回答ありがとうございます！
助かりました(^^)

回答No.1

Nakay702

以下のとおりお答えします。

＞I can't speak English well enough,and I was here time is shorter than the other guys.
（過去のことですからcanでなくcouldですね。I was here timeは変なので〔the period〕 I stayed hereとしましょう。）
⇒I couldn't speak English well enough, and 〔the period〕I stayed here shorter than the other guys.

＞But I was able to spend a wonderful time.
（これでいいと思いますが、「～と思う」を挿入しましょうか。）
⇒But I think I could spend a wonderful time.

＞Thank you for all your kindness.
（いいですね。強調するならso muchを入れましょうか。）
⇒Thank you so much for all your kindness.

＞Miss you guys already.
（「今はもう」と強調しましょうか。またguys にallやmyをつけて親しみを追加しましょう。）
⇒Now, already I miss you all my guys.

添削文を通して書けばこうなります。
I couldn't speak English well enough, and 〔the period〕 I stayed here shorter than the other guys.
But I think I could spend a wonderful time.
Thank you so much for all your kindness.
Now, already I miss you all my guys.