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明日英語でのプレゼンテーションがあります。２つの車広告の比較分析です。添削お願いします。私は前半を担当するので終わり方が中途半端になっていますが大丈夫です。 Today, we would like to discuss two advertisements in this presentation, TOYOTA COROLLA and PORSCHE MACAN. The purpose of this presentation is to deconstruct these advertisements by analyzing each strategy. To accomplish this purpose, we discuss mainly two points. First, we’ll talk about what each advertisement is trying to achieve by analyzing important elements of each ad. And then, we explain about similarities and differences between the ads by comparing these positioning and target segment. Please look at this advertisement. When you look at this, what attract your attention first? Yes, maybe this car jumps into your eyes. This is because it uses the simple beige background and there are no destructions. And the cat on the car is the big feature of this advertisement. By placing the cat on the product, viewers receive the message that this product is comfortable and they can relax every time they drive it. Now, I’d like to move on this advertisement. In this picture, the car is running in the city. And it is focused only on this product car. This is designed for an effect to make the product like a leading role in a city. It expresses people can have confidence in themselves by owning this product. And in this advertisement,“blank” is used effectively to improve visibility and gracefulness. Furthermore, by putting the bland mark here, they succeeded in improving luxury bland image. このプレゼンで、私たちは２つの広告、ひとつはトヨタカローラ、もうひとつはポルシェマカンについて議論したいと思います。このプレゼンの目的はこれら２つの広告の戦略を分析することによって、それらの効果を考えるということです。 その目標を達成するために私たちは主に2つのポイントを話したいと思います。まず、それぞれの特徴的なメッセージエレメンツからそれらの意味を分析することによって、それぞれの広告が達成しようとしているものを熟考します。そしてこれら２つの広告をポジショニング、マーケットセグメントの面で比較することによって類似点と違う点を明らかにします。 まず、こちらのトヨタの広告を見てください。この広告を見た時には車本体がぱっと目を引きます。それはほかに障害物がなくバックグラウンドもシンプルなベージュだという理由があります。そしてこの広告のもうひとつの特徴は、車の上にいるネコです。このネコというのは怠惰で家にいる動物の象徴であり、車の上にこのネコがいることで快適でリラックスできるというようなイメージを消費者に持たせることができます。 そしてこちらのポルシェの広告を見てください。こちらの広告では車は町の中を走っているという設定になっています。そして車だけに焦点が合っていることによってこの車が街の主役であるかのように感じさせることができます。そしてこの2ページのなかに大きな空白があることもこの広告の大きな特徴です。広告における余白は見る人に商品に対する高級感を与えることができます。そしてそこにポルシェのブランドマークがあることで、ポルシェがいかに高級感のあるブランドかということを伝えています。
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