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＜主張＞ I want to tell foreign people about Japanese tradition. ＜理由(1)＞ It is because I think it would be more meaningful to tell it rather than temporary fashions. ＜具体例＞ There are two things which especially I want to tell about. (1)First is Origami. It is unique to japan. Although it is difficult, it would enable us to communicate with each other. I think foreign people would enjoy it very much. (2)Second is Japanese foods. Recently they have been spreading widely, but there must be much more Japanese foods which aren't known to foreign people. ＜主張（再帰）＞ I want to tell wonderfulness of them. If I ware able to tell about such things, foreign people would come to be interested in Japan.（理由(2)？） ・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・・ 構成から。 理由(1)＝理由(2)という形にしないと、読み手からすれば「ああ、最後少し反れたな」という印象を受けます。なので、理由(2)を(1)に盛り込んでしまい、＜主張（再帰）＞で同じ内容で締める。こうすれば首尾貫徹した文章になるのではと思います。まあ参考までに。採点には反映されないのが現状だと思います。 文法へ。 仮定法ですが、実際の英文の時制とその意味（日本語訳）の違いに着目しましょう。そこをクリアできればあとはパターンです。 私の草案です。参考に。（但しスペルミスや、語順ミスは防ぎましょう！） I want more people around the world to know about Japanese culture. It is because I think it would be more meaningful to tell people over the world what Japanese style is like, instead of just painting over(or REPEATING) temporary fashions. By doing that more people will show interest in Japanese culture. There are two things which I especially want to introduce. First is Origami. It is a unique traditional practice in japan. Although it's difficult to both make and teach Origami, it would enable us to communicate with people over seas. I think people from other countries would enjoy it very much. Second is Japanese food. Recently it has been spreading widely across the world, but there are still much left to be reveiled. It is a pitty if those unique dishes are left under the dust, untouched by foreign people. So, I want to tell how wonderful they are. If I were able to get acorss the delightfulness of those Japanese cultures, it would help acknowledge Japanese culture all around the world.
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