最近の私の取り組みと環境問題への思い
- 最近、私はできるだけ物を持たないように努めている。
- たとえタダで提供されようが、滅多に使わないものを身の回りに置くことは居住空間を狭める上に、
- 環境問題を考えるとやすやすと物を捨てるのは後ろめたい気がするからである。
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(1)最近、私はできるだけ物を持たないように努めている。 (2)たとえタダで提供されようが、滅多に使わないものを身の回りに置くことは居住空間を狭める上に、 (3)環境問題を考えるとやすやすと物を捨てるのは後ろめたい気がするからである。 (1)Recently, I have striven to have nothing as possible. (2)That's because putting things I rarely use around me makes the living room small though I get them for free. (3)Also that's because I feel it is guilty to easily dump things, considering the environmental problems. (2)(3)はどちらも(1)の理由で、２つに分けられると思って分けた次第です。 「～だからです。また～だからです。」とどう言えば良いか分かりませんでした、結局、Ａｌｓｏを足しただけです。 アドバイスをお願いします！
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私でしたら、こう書きます： 1. Recently, I have been trying to own little as possible. 2. Even though they may be free, belongs that I rarely use can take up living space. 3. In addition, considering the environmental problems, I feel guilty of easily throwing away things.
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すみません、 belongsはbelongingsです。
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