Receiving vs Giving: Examining the Difficulty
- Explore the saying 'It is much harder to receive than to give' in the context of university entrance exams.
- In classes in colleges, it is often challenging for students to receive knowledge and ideology effectively.
- The need for concentration and prior understanding makes the process of receiving information more complex than giving it.
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大学の入試問題の類です。 問題『It is much harder to receive than to give.という言葉について述べよ。』 ここはこう書いた方が良い、などご指摘をいただければ幸いです。 作文 I agree with the statement especially in classes in colleges. For example,a professor has a class about philosophy. He can easily gives knowledge and ideology to his students. But I don't think all of them can accept his thoughts correctly. That's because they need to concentrate on his class and have a little knowledge about his thoughts before they have the class in order to understand what he gives.
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以下のとおりお答えします。 ＞I agree with the statement especially in classes in colleges. （後半は、especially when talking about college classes「特に大学の授業について話すときには」とでもしましょうか。） ⇒I agree with the statement especially when talking about college classes. ＞For example,a professor has a class about philosophy. （has a class about philosophy → gives a lecture on philosophy の方がいいでしょう。） ⇒For example, a professor gives a lecture on philosophy. ＞He can easily gives knowledge and ideology to his students. （gives→give、うっかりミスですね。） ⇒He can easily give knowledge and ideology to his students. ＞But I don't think all of them can accept his thoughts correctly. （カッコつきで、Of course, I'm no exception unfortunately! などと追加すれば「クスクス笑い」くらい取れるかも…。） ⇒But I don't think all of them can accept his thoughts correctly. (Of course, I'm no exception unfortunately!) ＞That's because they need to concentrate on his class and have a little knowledge about his thoughts before they have the class in order to understand what he gives. （a little は「少しは～する」、ただのlittleが「ほとんど～しない」。before they have the class は削除しましょう。〔入れるなら、動詞や時制の再考が必要〕。） ⇒That's because they need to concentrate on his class and have little knowledge about his thoughts in order to understand what he gives. 以上、ご回答まで。
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