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英文添削をお願いします。 29th September ‘10 Today, I worked in a relax mood, because my boss took a day off today. After working, I went out to drink with my friend of junior high school days. He is my best friend, so I could enjoy from the bottom of my heart. Especially when I lost my confidence now, this drink made me smooth over my hut feelings. I remembered that someone said , ‘If you drink, you should drink old alcohol. If you read a book, you should read old book. If you talk, you should talk with old friend.’ I thought I had a good day today.

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I worked in a relaxed mood today because my boss was off. After work, I went out to have a drink with my friend from the junior high school. He is my best friend so I really enjoy being with him. Especially when I was out of confidence, the drink I had eased my hurt feelings. I remember someone told me, " If you drink, you should drink old alcohol. If you read, you should read an old book. If you talk, you should talk with an old friend." I think I had a nice day today.

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