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問 新聞の休みの日は手持ちぶさただ。いつもはあわただしい朝の時間が特に長く感じられる。しかし、朝のコーヒーを楽しみ、駅までゆったりと歩けるのはこの日だけだ。休刊日もまんざらすてたものではない。 私の解答 I have nothing to do in press holidays. I feel busy and long morning time much longer than that of usual. However only press holidays can I enjoy morning coffee and go to the station at ease. Press holidays aren't altogether bad. よろしくお願い致しますm(_ _)m

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I feel busy and long morning time much longer than that of usual. [Those mornings makes me feel much longer than usual.] However only press holidays can I enjoy morning coffee and go to the station at ease. [But only this day, I can enjoy morning coffee and stroll to the station.]

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ご回答ありがとうございます。 nagatosさんの解答の方が自然な英語という感じがしますね。 参考になりました。 お世話になり、ありがとうございましたm(_ _)m

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