思い出に残るプレゼントとは？
- 高校入学の時、私の叔母がとても高価な財布を買ってくれました。それまではボロボロの財布を使っていて、そんな高価なものを買うお金もありませんでした。だから、私はその財布にとても喜んで、使えば使うほど好きになっていきました。長い間使い続けることを望んでおり、彼女にとても感謝しています。
- 高校入学の際、私の叔母が私にとても高価な財布をプレゼントしてくれました。以前はボロボロの財布を使っていて、そんな高価な財布を買う余裕もありませんでした。なので、私はその財布に大変喜びました。そして、使えば使うほど好きになっていきました。
- 高校入学の時、私の叔母が私にとても高価な財布を贈ってくれました。それまでボロボロの財布を使っていて、そんな高価なものを買う余裕もありませんでした。だから、私はその財布にとても感激しました。そして、使い続けることを望んでいます。
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大学受験対策用の自由英作文なのですが、添削よろしくお願いします。
大学受験対策用の自由英作文なのですが、添削よろしくお願いします。 テーマは「思い出に残っているプレゼント」です。 I much remember that my aunt bought me a very expensive wallet for my entering high school. Before that,I used shabby one and I had no money to buy such expensive one. So,I was much pleased with the wallet and the longer I have used it,the more I have liked it. I desire to use it for a long time and am very grateful to her. 加えて、質問があるのですが、 第4文のthe longer～以下ですが「長く使えば使うほど愛着がわいてきた」の意訳で書いたのですが時制は現在完了でいいでしょうか？ では、よろしくお願いします。
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既に＃１の方が正確で的確な回答をされていらっしゃるので、差し出がましいですがご容赦を。 one = 一つ・一個・数字としての単なるone の前に‘a(an)’をつけることはありません。 ただ、 >I had no money to buy such <an> expensive one. この‘one'は‘wallet’ の言い換えです。ご自身が書かれた文章なのでおわかりかと思います。 I had no money to buy such a wallet. → 形容詞を入れなければこうなりますよね。 I had no money to buy such an expensive wolett. にしても間違いではないということ。 けれど既に前の文章で‘wollet’ を贈られたことが書かれているので、one はwollet のことです。 例として、、、 １）How many wollets do you have? I have (only) one (wollet). ２）Are there any pockets on your jacket? There is (only) one (pocket). ↑ これが貴女が認識してる数量としての‘one’ （括弧内は省いてもよいものとして） ３）Did Jenny showed you her Engaged Ring? Oh yes! it was a gorgeous and excellent one. ４）Who is that girl? Is she a newcommer? yes, she is a new one. ４’Who is that girls? I've never seen her? She is the one of newcommers. ↑‘an expensisve one' と同様に、ある特定の物を表す‘one’です。 ４’の‘one' 新しく来た女の子 のことなので特定の物を示す‘the’になります。 ‘one’ 数量を差す場合と、代名詞的に使う違いがわかればよいかと。 また、余計なお世話ですが‘much' の使い方が間違ってはいないけれどこのような使い方はしません。 ＃１の方が添削されていらっしゃるように。 ‘much’ は多用できる便利な単語で、肯定平叙文中の動詞を修飾することもありますので、今一度辞書や参考書で 正しい？使い方を得とくするとよいかと。長文読解にに慣れるとより理解できると思われます。 余計なお節介になってしまったら申し訳ありません。受験まであと少し、ご健勝をお祈りします♪
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- tokking
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しつこくごめんなさい。 綴りミスがありましたので訂正のみ失礼します。 １）How many wollets do you have? I have (only) one (wollet). ２）Are there any pockets on your jacket? There is (only) one (pocket). ３）Did Jenny showed you her Engagement Ring? Oh yes! it was a gorgeous and excellent one. ４）Who is that girl? Is she a newcommer? Yes, she is a new one. ４’Who is that girl? I've never seen her before. She is the one of newcommers.
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わざわざ訂正ありがとうございます。
- angkolwhat
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[削除]＜挿入＞ I [much] remember [that my aunt bought me] a very expensive wallet<. My aunt bought it> [for my entering]<when I entered my> high school. Before that, I [used] <had a> shabby one [and]<but> I had no money to buy such <an> expensive one. So, I was [much]<very> pleased with the <new> wallet<.> [and]<I find> the longer I have used it, the more I have <come to>like[d] it. 完了形にして正解．現在形だと「さあこれからだ」という決意になります． I [desire]<am sure> to use it for <as>[a] long [time]<as possible.> [and]<I> am very grateful to her. 基本的な文はきちんと書けています．伝わるかな？と冒険しないことが大事．
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細かい添削ありがとうございます。 勉強になります。 ところで、私も書く時に悩んだのですが、a 形容詞 one の形は成り立つのでしょうか？ aとoneで一つ、という意味が重なるので不適と思い、aは消したのですが・・・。
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