日本語を英語にした添削お願い

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日本語を英語にしました。添削お願いします。

英語で伝えたく、頑張って英語にしたのですが 通じるか不安なので添削お願いできますでしょうか。 長文で申し訳ありません。。 メッセージありがとうございます! (thank you for your message) すごく嬉しいです!ありがとうございます (I'm really happy.thank you!!) 私もあなたと、YFEに出会えて凄く嬉しいです。 (I'm very happy meet you and your band YFE!) すぐ曲をチェックしました。 ( Your music was checked soon.) 凄くカッコイイ!パワーがあって、疾走感があって、セクシーでクール!! (So cool! Your band feel power and emotional and sexsy and cool) はい、私も旅行が好きです (Yes, I like to travel too) 遠い所だと、ニュージーランドとイタリアに行った事があります (I have been to NZ and Itaiy) 行ってみたい所は、カナダ、アメリカ、イギリス、エジプト、ブラジル、アフリカ、イースター島・・・あー!全世界!! (I want to go to Canada, America, Europe, Eyzpt, Blazil, Africa, Easter island... All parts of the world !) あ!でもカナダに友達がいるので近いうちに必ずカナダに行こうと考えています。 ( I have the friend in Canada. I will visit one of these days. ) あなたはコンサートで色んな場所に行ったりするんですか? (Have you been live to various places?) シンプルプランは知っていました。 (I know Simple Plan!!) 彼らと一緒に日本に来ていたなんてビックリです! (It was surprised to have come to Japan with them. ) また日本に来てください!それまでに全部歌を覚えて、ライブ楽しみにしています! (please come to Japan. All the songs are felt till then, and it makes it to the live enjoyment.) 彼らのライブは何度かいったことがあります。 (I have been in their concerts several times. ) でも日本に住んでいたのは知りませんでした。 (However, it did not know they had lived in Japan. ) 私も一番すきなのはHelenaです! (my favorite song is Helena too!! ) 大変お手数ですが 英語の得意な方、お力を貸して下さい。 宜しくお願いします。

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大変頑張ってますね。できるだけ原文を生かし、少し加筆させて貰いました。 メッセージありがとうございます! (thank you for your message) すごく嬉しいです!ありがとうございます (I'm really happy.thank you!!) 私もあなたと、YFEに出会えて凄く嬉しいです。 (I'm very happy to have met you and your band YFE!) すぐ曲をチェックしました。 ( I linstned to your music immediately.) 凄くカッコイイ!パワーがあって、疾走感があって、セクシーでクール!! (I thought it was so cool,powerful, speedy and sexy.) はい、私も旅行が好きです (Yes, I like to travel too) 遠い所だと、ニュージーランドとイタリアに行った事があります (I have been to NZ and Italy) 行ってみたい所は、カナダ、アメリカ、イギリス、エジプト、ブラジル、アフリカ、イースター島・・・あー!全世界!! (I want to go to Canada, America, Europe, Egypt, Brazil, Africa, Easter island... all places in the the world !) あ!でもカナダに友達がいるので近いうちに必ずカナダに行こうと考えています。 ( I have a friend in Canada, and I am thinking about visiting there one of these days. ) あなたはコンサートで色んな場所に行ったりするんですか? (You visit various places for concerts, donn't you?) シンプルプランは知っていました。 (I knew Simple Plan!!) 彼らと一緒に日本に来ていたなんてビックリです! (I was quite surprised to know you were in Japan with them. ) また日本に来てください!それまでに全部歌を覚えて、ライブ楽しみにしています! (Please come again. I will remember all your songs beforehand, and I look forward to your next live show here.) 彼らのライブは何度かいったことがあります。 (I saw their concerts a few times. ) でも日本に住んでいたのは知りませんでした。 (However, I did not know they lived in Japan. ) 私も一番すきなのはHelenaです! (my favorite song is Helena too!! )

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